Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing than handwriting because I think typing is more convenient and handwriting is more, umm, makes people tired because I need to use my, uh, hand and to use my pants.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Umm, I type on uh, I use laptop keyboard every day because usually, uh, these days I began to use computers and I started to learn how to use computers and tap on my keyboard because I think it's more useful in my work.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Umm, usually when I have no work to do, like I finished my all of my homework or my study plans and I started to or when I talk with my friends I try to type on a keyboard.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Umm, I go to find I went to find some videos about uh, how to improve your typing on the Bilibili or some other, uh, Internet, umm, yes, uh, application and uh, I also improve my.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 你的回答意思能被理解,但存在语法错误、重复填充词(umm, uh)和不恰当的表达("use my pants")。建议:1) 用清晰的主题句直接回答问题;2) 用一到两句具体理由支持观点,避免无意义的停顿词;3) 检查常见搭配(prefer X to Y);4) 控制句子不超过5句。示例句型可先背诵并稍作个人化。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit and store my notes on a computer easily, which saves time. Also, typing is less tiring for long tasks because I don’t have to write by hand for hours.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答有核心信息,但表达冗长且重复,含填充词。建议:1) 直接回答先给出事实("I use a laptop keyboard every day");2) 用一到两句具体原因并使用连接词(because, so, therefore);3) 避免重复说同一意思,精确说明用途(work, study等)。
Ví dụ: I use a laptop keyboard every day because most of my work is done on a laptop. It’s more practical for typing emails, writing reports and researching online, so I find it very useful.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答没有直接回应“什么时候学会”的时间点,内容偏向何时使用键盘。建议:1) 开门见山给出时间或年龄(e.g. when I was at school/at university/aged 12);2) 接着补充简短背景或原因,不超过两句;3) 避免模糊表达和填充词。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was at secondary school, around the age of 12. At that time we had computer lessons where I practised typing for assignments and chatting with friends online.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答给出途径但表达混乱且未完成句子。建议:1) 用一到两句完整说明具体方法(videos, typing practice, software);2) 提供具体细节(网站名、练习频率、练习内容如 accuracy/speed);3) 使用连接词使逻辑清晰并避免停顿词。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by watching tutorial videos on sites like Bilibili and then practicing with typing apps for 20 minutes a day. This helps me increase my speed and accuracy by focusing on common key patterns and timed exercises.
× I prefer typing than handwriting because I think typing is more convenient and handwriting is more, umm, makes people tired because I need to use my, uh, hand and to use my pants.
✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I think typing is more convenient, and handwriting makes people tired because I need to use my hand.
错误类型:介词使用不当。应该使用“prefer A to B”结构表示“更喜欢A而不是B”,不能用“prefer A than B”。句子中另有多余和不合逻辑短语(如“to use my pants”),应删除或改为正确表达。建议:记住固定搭配“prefer A to B”,并去掉不必要或错误的词语。
× I prefer typing than handwriting because I think typing is more convenient and handwriting is more, umm, makes people tired because I need to use my, uh, hand and to use my pants.
✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I think typing is more convenient, and handwriting makes people tired because I need to use my hand.
错误类型:代词使用不当以及人称一致问题。原句“my pants”显然是不符合语境的代词/名词,可能是口误,应为“my hand”或删除。建议:说话时注意代词所指对象和语境是否匹配,必要时慢速思考再表达。
× I use laptop keyboard every day because usually, uh, these days I began to use computers and I started to learn how to use computers and tap on my keyboard because I think it's more useful in my work.
✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because recently I began to use computers and started learning how to use them and type on my keyboard because I think it's more useful for my work.
错误类型:动词+ -ing 形式使用不当。原文中“started to learn”可以改为“started learning”,两者可用但句子风格更自然用-ing形式;此外“tap on my keyboard”应改为“type on my keyboard”。建议:在表示开始做某事时,可用“start doing”使语气更自然;表示键入用“type”。
× I use laptop keyboard every day because usually, uh, these days I began to use computers and I started to learn how to use computers and tap on my keyboard because I think it's more useful in my work.
✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because recently I began to use computers and started learning how to use them and type on my keyboard because I think it's more useful for my work.
错误类型:冠词错误。应在可数名词单数前加不定冠词“a”,如“a laptop keyboard”。另外短语“useful in my work”更常见的表达是“useful for my work”。建议:注意在单数可数名词前使用冠词,并使用更地道的搭配。
× Umm, usually when I have no work to do, like I finished my all of my homework or my study plans and I started to or when I talk with my friends I try to type on a keyboard.
✓ Usually, when I have no work to do, for example after I have finished all of my homework or study plans, or when I talk with my friends, I try to type on a keyboard.
错误类型:时态和时态一致性问题。原句混合了现在时和过去时("have no work" 和 "I finished"),应保持时态一致;在表示完成动作后应用现在完成时“have finished”。建议:在描述经常性或习惯性行为时使用现在时;描述已经完成的动作用现在完成时。
× Umm, I go to find I went to find some videos about uh, how to improve your typing on the Bilibili or some other, uh, Internet, umm, yes, uh, application and uh, I also improve my.
✓ I went to find some videos about how to improve typing on Bilibili or other internet platforms, and I also practiced to improve my typing.
错误类型:句子结构混乱。原句有重复和未完成的短语(如"I go to find I went to find"和结尾未完成的"I also improve my")。建议:简化句子,保持时态一致并完成句子成分,例如将动作明确表述为“watched videos”或“I went to find videos”并补全“improve my typing/practice typing”。