Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence first, correct grammar (use present simple and correct verb forms), avoid redundancy, and add one specific reason for each preference using a linking word. Keep to max 4–5 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting for personal letters, but I use typing for study notes. For example, when I write a letter I like handwriting because it feels more personal and expressive. However, when studying, I type because it is faster and easier to organize materials on a computer.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement (desktop, laptop, or both). Fix grammar (use 'both' properly, remove filler words), and give one specific reason related to your major with a linking word for coherence.

Ví dụ: I use both a desktop and a laptop almost every day. Because my major is design, I use a desktop for graphic work that needs more power, and I use a laptop when I need to work on projects away from my desk.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer with correct tense and age phrase (e.g., 'when I was five'). Remove hesitations and provide a short supporting detail explaining how or why you learned then.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about five years old. My parents let me use the family computer before I started elementary school, so I practiced simple games and typing exercises early on.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence describing the method, use correct noun phrases and article usage, and give one specific detail about the game and how it helps (e.g., improves speed or accuracy). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by playing a popular Korean game called Hankum Tata. The game requires fast and accurate typing, so by practicing it regularly I increased my speed and reduced my mistakes.

× It is different by case by case because I am prefer handwriting for the writing a letter, but if I have to studying for something, I prefer the typing because it's more convenient.

✓ It is different case by case because I prefer handwriting when writing a letter, but if I have to study for something, I prefer typing because it's more convenient.

Multiple verb-form errors: 'I am prefer' is incorrect; use simple present 'I prefer' for habits (Grammar Problem Type IDs 2 and 6). 'the writing a letter' should be 'when writing a letter' using a gerund phrase correctly (ID 8). 'have to studying' should be 'have to study' using the base form after 'have to' (ID 6). Remove unnecessary articles before 'typing' (article error ID 22). Suggestion: use simple present for preferences, use base form after modal-like 'have to', and use gerunds correctly for actions like 'writing'.

× Yeah, I think I usually use that the both of them in almost every day because my major is designed so I have to doing some work and the computer definitely. So yeah, I use that often, almost every day.

✓ Yeah, I think I usually use both of them almost every day because my major is design-related, so I have to do some work on the computer. So yeah, I use them often, almost every day.

Errors: 'use that the both of them' mixes determiners and is ungrammatical; use 'both of them' or 'both' (ID 22/article errors and ID 26 sentence structure). 'my major is designed' is wrong verb form; use 'my major is design-related' or 'my major requires design' (ID 6/26). 'I have to doing' is incorrect; after 'have to' use base verb 'do' (ID 6/8). 'the computer definitely' is awkward; use 'on the computer' (preposition error ID 11). Also change 'that' to 'them' to refer to keyboards (pronoun error ID 12). Suggestions: simplify determiner use, keep subject-verb forms correct, and use base verbs after 'have to'.

× Wow, it's really for for memory, I think almost five years old. I memorized I using the computer before I into the elementary school, so.

✓ Wow, it's really a long memory; I think I was almost five years old. I remember using the computer before I entered elementary school.

Errors: 'I think almost five years old' lacks verb 'was' for age in past (past tense issue ID 5/6). 'I memorized I using the computer' misuses 'memorize' and has wrong verb forms; use 'I remember using' (ID 9/10). 'before I into the elementary school' misses verb 'entered' or 'went into' (past tense issue ID 5 and preposition/article issues ID 11/22). Suggestions: use 'was' to state past age, use 'remember' + gerund for recalling actions, and use appropriate past verb like 'entered'.

× Well, in Korea we have a fun game in for the improve my typing. This name is Hankum Tata. We it's some kind of game, but there's almost using the type. So we have really fast keyboard.

✓ Well, in Korea we have a fun game to improve my typing. Its name is Hankum Tata. It's a kind of game that uses typing a lot, so we become really fast typists.

Errors: 'in for the improve my typing' incorrect preposition and article; use 'to improve my typing' (preposition/module error ID 4/11). 'This name is' should be 'Its name is' (pronoun/article error ID 12/22). 'We it's some kind of game' is ungrammatical; use 'It's a kind of game' (sentence structure ID 26). 'there's almost using the type' incorrect phrase; clarify as 'that uses typing a lot' using gerund 'typing' (gerund/verb+ -ing ID 8). 'we have really fast keyboard' unclear: use 'we become really fast typists' or 'we develop very fast typing skills' (noun/adjective misuse ID 13). Suggestions: use 'to' + verb to express purpose, use correct possessive pronoun 'its', use gerund 'typing', and choose proper noun phrases for skills or people.