Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I love handwriting. I think it is very relaxed when I write things myself.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I need to do my homework and do a lot of experiments.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Umm, I can't remember, in fact maybe 5 or 6 when I had my first telephone.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Actually I don't know because my typing is not really good, but I guess maybe type more everyday to practice.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并包含一到两个具体原因或例子来支持观点,避免泛泛而谈。可以用连词/过渡短语(例如: because, for example, and)使句子更连贯,并控制在最多5句内。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me think more clearly and slows me down so I make fewer mistakes. For example, when I take notes in class, writing by hand helps me remember the material better than typing.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答结构良好但可以更具体:说明使用笔记本的频率、时长或具体任务,并用连接词扩展句子以增强信息量。例如说明哪些作业或实验需要用电脑,或每天使用多少小时。
Ví dụ: Yes, I use a laptop every day for about four to five hours. I mainly type lab reports and programming assignments, and I also use it to record experimental data during practical sessions.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更确定并尽量给出清晰的时间点或年龄范围,避免犹豫语(umm)和含糊不清。可以先给出直接答案然后补充简短背景(例如谁教你的或在哪学的)。
Ví dụ: I don't remember the exact year, but I learned to type when I was about five or six after my parents gave me my first phone. My older sibling also taught me some basic typing skills at that time.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 回答应更积极并给出具体的改进方法和步骤(如练习工具、每天练习时长或特定练习内容),用连词组织想法,避免模糊词汇(maybe, I don't know)。
Ví dụ: To improve my typing, I practice on online typing websites for 20 minutes every day and focus on accuracy before speed. I also do specific drills for difficult keys and use typing games to make practice more engaging.
× I love handwriting. I think it is very relaxed when I write things myself.
✓ I love handwriting. I think it feels very relaxing when I write things myself.
原句中“it is very relaxed”用法不当。形容人或事物使人放松应使用形容词“relaxing”或用“feel relaxed”。这里更自然的是“it feels very relaxing”或“it is very relaxing”。建议使用“feels very relaxing”来表达写字让人感到放松。
× Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I need to do my homework and do a lot of experiments.
✓ Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I need to do my homework and carry out a lot of experiments.
原句中“do a lot of experiments”在语境下虽然能被理解,但与“homework”并列时动词搭配更自然的是“carry out experiments”或“do experiments”。此外“Yes,”作为回答无误。建议用“carry out a lot of experiments”以更准确表达进行实验的意思。
× Umm, I can't remember, in fact maybe 5 or 6 when I had my first telephone.
✓ Umm, I can't remember. In fact, maybe when I was five or six, when I had my first telephone.
原句缺少动词结构和适当的时态表达。表示年龄时应使用过去时态结构“when I was five or six”。需把句子分开并补上“when I was”,使句子完整且时态一致。建议把数字写作“five or six”并加上“was”。
× Actually I don't know because my typing is not really good, but I guess maybe type more everyday to practice.
✓ Actually I don't know because my typing is not really good, but I guess I should type more every day to practise.
原句中省略主语和情态动词导致结构不完整;“guess maybe type more”不符合语法。应补上主语或情态动词,如“I guess I should type more”或“I guess I will type more”。另外“everyday”是形容词,应写成副词短语“every day”。最后英式拼写“practise”或美式“practice”。建议使用“I guess I should type more every day to practise.”