Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Well, it depends on the content. For example, when I write my diary I prefer handwriting, but if I handle my work I tend to type on a keyboard because it's more convenient to fix and amount.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Of course, because I'm a lawyer and I have a lot of work related affairs to do on the computer, so it will be frequent for me to type on a laptop.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Well, I learned how to type on the keyboard in the first lesson in my elementary school. In that lesson we learned different method to type by some typing games.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Well, I believe practice makes perfect, so I practice as much as I can and this method is really helpful for improving my typing accuracy and speed.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但有语法和用词问题,句子较长且有些冗余。应直接给出立场句,然后用一到两句具体原因和例子支持,注意语法(例如 replace “amount” with “edit” 或 “format”)和连词使用,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer both, depending on the task. For private reflections like a diary, I usually handwrite because it feels more personal. However, for work-related documents I type on a computer because it's faster and easier to edit.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答信息明确但句子结构有些笨重,使用了一些不自然的词组(例如 “work related affairs” 和“it will be frequent”)。建议改用更自然的表达并简化句子,首句直接回答,随后简要说明原因并用连词连接。
Ví dụ: Yes, I type on a laptop every day. As a lawyer I deal with many documents and emails, so I rely on my laptop for drafting and researching.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 回答时间信息清楚,但用词和语法需改进(如 “in the first lesson in my elementary school” 可更简洁,动词时态及单数复数要注意)。可以直接给出时间点,然后补充具体活动作为支持。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in my first year of elementary school. In that class we practiced touch-typing through simple games that taught finger placement and speed.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容合理但有些泛,缺少具体细节或例子。建议用一两句说明具体练习方法(比如使用打字软件、设定速度目标或练习短文),并用连接词使结构更紧凑。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. I use online typing programs and set weekly speed and accuracy goals, and I also type short passages from news articles to build real-world fluency.
× For example, when I write my diary I prefer handwriting, but if I handle my work I tend to type on a keyboard because it's more convenient to fix and amount.
✓ For example, when I write my diary I prefer handwriting, but if I handle my work I tend to type on a keyboard because it's more convenient to fix and edit.
句子中“amount”用法不当,与上下文想表达的“修改、编辑”无关。应使用“edit”或“make changes”来表示“修改”。此外“fix and edit”搭配更自然。建议多记常用搭配,如“fix a mistake”、“edit a document”。
× Of course, because I'm a lawyer and I have a lot of work related affairs to do on the computer, so it will be frequent for me to type on a laptop.
✓ Of course. Because I'm a lawyer and I have a lot of work-related affairs to do on the computer, I frequently type on a laptop.
原句语序和动词短语不自然且“work related”应用连字符“work-related”。“so it will be frequent for me to type”语法不符合英语习惯,改为副词频率“frequently”放在动词前更自然。建议学习副词放置和形容词复合词的连字符用法。
× Well, I learned how to type on the keyboard in the first lesson in my elementary school.
✓ Well, I learned how to type on the keyboard in the first lesson at my elementary school.
语法问题主要是介词选择。“in my elementary school”常见但更自然是“at my elementary school”表示在某所学校的一节课。使用正确介词可以提高地道程度。
× In that lesson we learned different method to type by some typing games.
✓ In that lesson we learned different methods to type through some typing games.
这里存在复数问题和介词搭配问题。“different method”应为复数“different methods”。另外“by some typing games”改为“through some typing games”或“using some typing games”更符合表达“通过”的意思。建议注意可数名词单复数与介词搭配。
× Well, I believe practice makes perfect, so I practice as much as I can and this method is really helpful for improving my typing accuracy and speed.
✓ Well, I believe practice makes perfect, so I practice as much as I can, and this method is really helpful for improving my typing accuracy and speed.
此句主要是标点连接问题,语法本身正确。建议在连接两个并列句子时用逗号加连词“and”使句子更清晰。没有时态错误。