Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Uh, it depends on situation. When I need to write an article, I prefer typing. But uh, when I want to recite something, I prefer handwriting.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I type on a laptop keyboard every day. I think a desktop is a little kind of oscillate because it's big and heavy, but if you have a laptop you can take it to anywhere you want to go.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned this when I was a primary school kid. We have a special cross to teach every kind how to type on a keyboard.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I think practice makes perfect, so if I want to improve in my typing I will try my best to practice more. But actually I didn't practice my typing in speciality. I think it's a daily work.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、简洁,并用连接词把两种偏好衔接起来;避免口头语(如“uh”)并补充简短具体原因以丰富内容。比如先给主题句,然后用 because 或 while 引出原因。句子控制在不超过5句内。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing for articles because it's faster and easier to edit, while I choose handwriting for memorizing passages because writing by hand helps me remember better.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 注意词汇使用准确性(不要用“oscillate”描述笨重),避免冗长表述。先直接回答,再用一两句具体原因和一个对比,用连接词 like because or so。减少重复。
Ví dụ: I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and convenient, whereas a desktop is bulky and not easy to move.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答需更准确自然,修正语法和词汇错误(如“primary school kid”可用“primary school”或“when I was in primary school”;“special cross”表述不明确)。说明学习方式和大致时间,尽量用一到两句具体细节。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school. My school offered a dedicated typing class where we practiced touch-typing on computers for a few months.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更具体,给出实际方法(如练习网站、练习时长、目标速度或精确练习内容)。避免笼统陈述,使用连接词如 however 或 actually 时保持句子简洁。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing on online typing platforms for 20 minutes a day and focusing on accuracy first, then gradually increasing speed. I also use typing tests to track my progress every week.
× Uh, it depends on situation.
✓ Uh, it depends on the situation.
句子缺少定冠词“the”。在英语中表示特定情况时需要使用定冠词。改正建议:在“situation”前加“the”,即“depends on the situation”。
× When I need to write an article, I prefer typing.
✓ When I need to write an article, I prefer typing.
此句时态与语境正确,无需修改。只是保持原句即可。
× But uh, when I want to recite something, I prefer handwriting.
✓ But uh, when I want to recite something, I prefer handwriting.
此句时态与用法正确,无需修改。
× I type on a laptop keyboard every day.
✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day.
句子结构和时态正确,无需修改。
× I think a desktop is a little kind of oscillate because it's big and heavy, but if you have a laptop you can take it to anywhere you want to go.
✓ I think a desktop is a bit awkward because it's big and heavy, but if you have a laptop you can take it anywhere you want to go.
原句中“a little kind of oscillate”搭配错误且单词“oscillate”意思为“摆动/振荡”,与语境不符。应使用表示“不方便/笨重”的词,如“a bit awkward”或“a little inconvenient”。另外“take it to anywhere”中“to”多余,正确搭配是“take it anywhere”。建议使用固定短语并删除多余介词。
× I learned this when I was a primary school kid.
✓ I learned this when I was a primary school student.
“primary school kid”口语且不够正式,虽不严格是语法错误,但可用更自然的表达“primary school student”。时态“learned”与时间状语“when I was...”一致,保持过去式。建议用更恰当名词替换“kid”。
× We have a special cross to teach every kind how to type on a keyboard.
✓ We had a special course to teach every child how to type on a keyboard.
原句存在多个问题:1) “cross”应为“course”;2) “every kind”用法错误,应该是“every child”或“all kinds of students”视语境而定;3) 时态应与“learned”一致用过去式“had”。因此建议改为“We had a special course to teach every child how to type on a keyboard.”。
× I think practice makes perfect, so if I want to improve in my typing I will try my best to practice more.
✓ I think practice makes perfect, so if I want to improve my typing I will try my best to practice more.
该句总体正确,仅将“improve in my typing”改为更自然的“improve my typing”(去掉介词“in”)。这不是严格的语法错误但更符合地道用法。建议在动词“improve”后直接加宾语。
× But actually I didn't practice my typing in speciality.
✓ But actually I didn't practice my typing specially.
原句“in speciality”用法错误。“specially”或“particularly”更合适表示“特别地/专门地”。如果想说“我并没有专门练习打字”,用“didn't practice my typing specially”或“didn't practise typing specifically”。建议改为“didn't practice my typing specially”。
× I think it's a daily work.
✓ I think it's daily work.
“a daily work”中“work”作为不可数名词时不加不定冠词。更自然的表达是“daily work”或“a daily task”。建议去掉“a”或改为“a daily task”。