Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Compare handwriting. I will prefer typing. Working is need typing. I always type my words in the computer.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Compare tap on laptop keyboard. I always use desktop. Our work need to tap on desktop.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Why was in primary school our subject? Is it technology? We usually go to class to learn type on keyboard.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I think working is improve my typing. Why working I? Use the computer to tap on keyboard.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不够自然且语法错误较多。建议:首先直接给出主题句,然后用一两句具体理由或例子支持。使用连词使句子更连贯,注意时态和冠词。可以说清为何工作需要打字以及手写的局限。练习将短句合并为完整句(主语+谓语+宾语)。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because most of my work requires using a computer. For example, I usually write emails and reports, which are easier and faster to edit on a laptop.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答含混且表达重复。建议:直接回答是哪种设备,给出具体频率和原因,使用连接词(because/so)来解释。注意单词形式(type, use)和句子完整性。可说明对桌面键盘的偏好原因(如更舒适或更方便)。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a desktop computer every day because my office has a desktop with a full keyboard. It feels more comfortable for long typing sessions than a laptop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答有信息但句式混乱。建议:用清晰的时间表达(e.g. when I was in primary school),并说明学习方式(课程、练习)或持续时间。使用连词如“so”或“and”来连接细节,注意疑问句与陈述句的区别。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school as part of our computer classes. We practiced in class using typing exercises and continued improving over the years.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答重复且逻辑不清。建议:说明具体方法(大量练习、在线练习软件、正确指法等),并给出例子或频率。使用连词说明因果关系(because/so)并使用正确动词形式(improve, practice)。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing regularly at work and using online typing programs. For example, I spend about 20 minutes a day on typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.
× Compare handwriting. I will prefer typing. Working is need typing. I always type my words in the computer.
✓ I prefer typing to handwriting. I always type my work on the computer.
存在多个问题: 1) 原句“Compare handwriting.” 用法不对,应该表达“比起手写,我更喜欢打字”,需用 prefer ... to ... 表达偏好(句子结构错误)。 2) “I will prefer typing.” 在此处谈的是一般偏好,不应使用将来时,改为一般现在时“prefer”(时态问题)。 3) “Working is need typing.” 语序和词类错误;应表达“工作需要使用打字/电脑”,改为“I always type my work on the computer.” 同时修正介词用法(use on the computer / type on the computer)。 改进建议:用 prefer + to 表达比较,日常或习惯性动作用一般现在时,注意英语中常用介词为 “on the computer” 或 “on a computer / on my computer”。
× Compare tap on laptop keyboard. I always use desktop. Our work need to tap on desktop.
✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard, but I also use a desktop. Our work requires typing on a desktop.
问题说明: 1) “Compare tap on laptop keyboard.” 语序和表达错误,应为“I usually type on a laptop keyboard” 或 “Compared with handwriting, I type on a laptop keyboard” (句子结构错误)。 2) “I always use desktop.” 漏冠词,正确为 “a desktop” 或 “the desktop”(冠词错误/文章错误)。 3) “Our work need to tap on desktop.” 主谓不一致且用词不当,“need” 应与单数主语搭配为 “needs”,并且“tap” 用法不自然,应用 “type”,需要介词 “on a desktop”。 改进建议:注意主谓一致(needs),使用正确冠词(a/the),将“tap”替换为“type”,并使用“on a desktop/on the desktop”。
× Why was in primary school our subject? Is it technology? We usually go to class to learn type on keyboard.
✓ I learned to type on the keyboard in primary school in my technology class. We usually went to class to learn typing on the keyboard.
问题说明: 1) “Why was in primary school our subject?” 语序混乱且不符合英语习惯,应直接说明“我在小学的科技课上学会了打字”(句子结构错误)。 2) 时态问题:提到过去的学习经历,应使用过去时(learned / went),因此将动词改为过去式(past tense)。 3) “learn type on keyboard” 动词搭配不正确,应该是 “learn to type” 或 “learn typing”,并加上合适的介词 “on the keyboard”(动词不定式/动名词形式和介词用法)。 改进建议:谈过去经历时用一般过去时,learn 后面常用不定式 to do 或动名词 doing,根据语境选择,并注意词序。
× I think working is improve my typing. Why working I? Use the computer to tap on keyboard.
✓ I think working improves my typing. When I work, I use the computer to type on the keyboard.
问题说明: 1) “working is improve my typing” 时态和动词形式错误,应为主语 + 动词+s(主谓一致):“working improves”。 2) “Why working I?” 语序错误且不符合疑问句结构;如果要表达原因可说 “When I work” 或 “By working” 等。 3) “Use the computer to tap on keyboard.” 缺主语且用词不当,应补主语并把“tap”换成常用的“type”,以及使用介词 “on the keyboard”。 改进建议:主语为动名词时作主语动词要用第三人称单数形式(improves);表达习惯动作用一般现在时并注意句子完整性(主语+谓语);将“tap”替换为“type”,并使用“on the keyboard/on the computer”。