Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Personally, I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate more on what I'm writing. I also enjoy the special feeling of touching a notebook, and buying some fancy pants and stationery makes the process more enjoyable.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I use my laptop cable every single day, mainly for my study and work, and almost all my presentations and research are done on computers, so I find it is more convenient to type and handwriting because it is more easier for me to edit some words.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
It is hard for me to remember the accurate time. I think it it was when I was in primary school and our school offer offered a special class where we were taught typing techniques and given practice exercise every class to help us type faster.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Actually, I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. And I think regular practice enough and there's no need to access, uh, practice deliberately. For example, I make presentations and PowerPoint everyday, so typing a lot helps me get faster and more accurate over time.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答自然但有些用词和表达不够准确或略显冗余。应直接给出观点,然后用一至两句具体且相关的细节支持,避免无关或模糊的词语(例如“fancy pants”不合上下文)。注意句子简洁、连贯,可使用连接词(because, so, and)更流畅地组织信息。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate and remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand during lectures, I focus more on key points and later find it easier to review them.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答包含意思但语法和词汇错误较多,且句子冗长不够清晰。应先直接回答(laptop),然后用一两句说明原因并举例。注意名词和动词搭配(例如“laptop cable”应为“laptop”或“desktop”),避免重复(typing and handwriting混淆)。保持句子结构简单,使用恰当的比较/原因连接词。
Ví dụ: I type on a laptop every day for my studies and work. It's more convenient because I can quickly edit documents and prepare presentations on the go.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答清楚并提供背景,但有重复和少量语法错误。应更直接地给出时间范围(e.g., in primary school)并用一两句具体细节支持,如课程内容或练习频率。避免重复单词(it it, offer offered)并注意单复数和时态一致。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in primary school when we had a weekly keyboarding class. In each lesson we practiced typing drills and timed exercises, which helped me improve speed and accuracy.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答传达了主要观点但表达不够精炼且有语法错误和犹豫词。建议先给出简洁的主题句,然后用具体方法或频率(e.g., timed drills, online exercises, daily typing for 30 minutes)作支撑。避免口头禅(uh)和模糊说法(no need to access/practice deliberately)。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly through daily practice, such as preparing presentations and doing timed typing exercises. I also use online typing tests once a week to track my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate more on what I'm writing.
✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate more on what I am writing.
句子本身主要问题是时态表达不够自然。将缩写或口语化的“I'm”完整写出更符合正式书面或考试口语答案的风格。建议在正式场合使用完整形式以显得更规范。
× I also enjoy the special feeling of touching a notebook, and buying some fancy pants and stationery makes the process more enjoyable.
✓ I also enjoy the special feeling of touching a notebook, and buying some fancy pens and stationery makes the process more enjoyable.
原句中“pants”是“裤子”的意思,使用错误的名词导致表意不清。应使用“pens”(钢笔/笔)来表达“买一些别致的笔”。建议检查名词拼写与词义,确保与上下文匹配。
× I use my laptop cable every single day, mainly for my study and work, and almost all my presentations and research are done on computers, so I find it is more convenient to type and handwriting because it is more easier for me to edit some words.
✓ I use my laptop every single day, mainly for my study and work. Almost all my presentations and research are done on computers, so I find it more convenient to type than to handwrite because it is easier for me to edit words.
原句存在多个问题:1) “laptop cable”应为“laptop”(笔记本电脑),前者含义错误;2) “type and handwriting”搭配不当,应该使用动词不定式对比“to type than to handwrite”;3) “more easier”是冗余比较,正确为“easier”或“more convenient”;4) “edit some words”中“some”可删除使表达更自然。建议注意词汇搭配、比较结构及冗余副词的使用。
× It is hard for me to remember the accurate time.
✓ It is hard for me to remember the exact time.
原句中“accurate time”搭配不自然,通常使用“exact time”来表示“确切的时间”。这是词语搭配问题,属于现在时语境下的用词不当。建议记忆常见固定搭配以避免直译造成的不自然表达。
× I think it it was when I was in primary school and our school offer offered a special class where we were taught typing techniques and given practice exercise every class to help us type faster.
✓ I think it was when I was in primary school, and our school offered a special class where we were taught typing techniques and given practice exercises every class to help us type faster.
存在多个错误:1) 重复的“it it”应去掉一个;2) 时态应为过去时,使用“offered”而不是“offer”(已改);3) “practice exercise”应为复数“practice exercises”,因为每节课都有练习;整体为过去时态和单复数搭配问题。建议仔细检查重复词、动词时态一致以及名词单复数形式。
× Actually, I improve my typing mainly through regular practice.
✓ Actually, I improve my typing mainly through regular practice.
句子语法正确,时态与语境一致,无需修改。但在口语中可视情境用现在完成时“I have improved”来强调至今的进步。建议根据语境选择更合适的时态。
× And I think regular practice enough and there's no need to access, uh, practice deliberately.
✓ I think regular practice is enough, and there is no need to practice deliberately.
原句缺少系动词“is”,导致句子结构不完整;“access”用法错误,应为“practice”或“seek additional practice”,因此改为更自然的表达“no need to practice deliberately”。建议保证句子主谓结构完整并使用正确动词。
× For example, I make presentations and PowerPoint everyday, so typing a lot helps me get faster and more accurate over time.
✓ For example, I make presentations and PowerPoints every day, so typing a lot helps me get faster and more accurate over time.
问题包括:1) “PowerPoint”用于表示文件或演示文稿时可用复数“PowerPoints”或“PowerPoint presentations”;2) “everyday”作形容词意为“日常的”,此处应使用副词短语“every day”;因此修改为“PowerPoints every day”。建议区分“everyday”(形容词)和“every day”(副词短语),并根据语境决定是否用复数。