Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer to choose the typing as typing I can show the emotions when I type into my friends and my family and also typing is help me better to show my feeling.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. Firstly, I need to learn the aisles every day because I need to pass the exam. Secondly, uh, I think it's the laptop, uh, keyboard and the desktop is really a necessary part of our work and we need to do everything like the type.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I think I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was 6. As a man. Our school teach us how to type in the computer classes and it's really a great time. It's really interesting.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, I think I improve my typing through the everydays tied to my friends and my family. Just only this as they all say that practice every day and you get a better skill.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、简洁且语法正确。先给出直接的主题句(我更喜欢打字),然后用1–2句具体原因支持(例如更快、便于编辑、表情符号/语气更清晰)。避免重复和语法错误,使用连接词如“because”或“so”。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it’s faster and easier to edit. Also, when I message friends and family I can use emojis and punctuation to show my emotions more clearly.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏逻辑与具体性,且有语法和用词错误。应先直接回答:Yes, I use a laptop (or desktop) every day. 然后给出具体原因(如学习、工作或方便携带),使用连接词(for example, because, and)并避免语气词和重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I study and take online practice tests. For work, the laptop is more convenient to carry and lets me type anywhere.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 总体可以,但要更自然、语法正确并避免不相关的短语(如“As a man”)。先直接回答具体时间,然后补充细节(在哪里学、学到什么、感受如何),用连接词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was six in my primary school computer class. The teacher taught us basic typing skills, and I found it interesting because I could type faster than before.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答应更具体并使用正确表达。先给出方法总述,然后列举具体练习方式(定时练习、使用在线练习软件、练习盲打、设置目标)。用连接词(for example, such as)并避免模糊表达。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing every day. For example, I use online typing tests for 15 minutes, focus on touch-typing exercises, and set weekly speed and accuracy goals.
× I prefer to choose the typing as typing I can show the emotions when I type into my friends and my family and also typing is help me better to show my feeling.
✓ I prefer typing because when I type I can show emotions to my friends and family, and typing helps me better show my feelings.
错误类型对应为“动词+ -ing形式/动词形式使用不当”(参照表中第8项)。说明:句中使用了不必要的不定式“to choose the typing”和重复的“typing”结构,应该使用动名词“typing”作偏好表达(prefer doing),并将动词形式一致化;此外“help me”后应接动词原形“show”,且“into my friends”应为介词“to my friends”;“feeling”需复数“feelings”。改进建议:当表达偏好时,用“prefer + 动名词”;避免不必要的“choose”;保持动词形式一致并注意介词搭配。
× and also typing is help me better to show my feeling.
✓ and also typing helps me better show my feelings.
错误类型为第三人称单数问题(第2项)。说明:主语“typing”是第三人称单数,谓语动词应加-s,即“helps”;且“help”后接动词原形“show”,不加“to”。此外“feeling”应使用复数“feelings”。改进建议:主语为单数或不可数时,注意动词加-s;“help”后接动词原形。
× Yes, I do. Firstly, I need to learn the aisles every day because I need to pass the exam.
✓ Yes, I do. Firstly, I need to practice the aisles (or 'skills') every day because I need to pass the exam.
错误类型对应为现在时/词汇使用问题(第6项)。说明:句中“learn the aisles”搭配不当,likely 要表达“练习技巧/practice aisles”或“practice skills”;原句时态可以保留为现在时,但应改正词汇搭配。改进建议:确认想表达的名词('aisles'通常指通道),如指技能用'skills'或用'practice'替换'learn'。
× it's the laptop, uh, keyboard and the desktop is really a necessary part of our work and we need to do everything like the type.
✓ It's the laptop keyboard; the desktop is also a necessary part of our work, and we need to do everything like typing.
错误类型为代词/指代和句子结构问题(第12项及第26项)。说明:原句中“it's the laptop, uh, keyboard and the desktop is”结构混乱,代词“it”指代不清;“do everything like the type”搭配错误,'type'应为动名词'typing'。改进建议:将句子拆分为清晰的部分,避免不必要的代词,使用正确的动名词形式。
× I think I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was 6.
✓ I think I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was six.
错误类型为过去时问题(第5项),主要为数字书写格式问题而非时态,但保持一致性和写法更自然。说明:用过去时“learned”是正确的;建议将数字用单词书写或一致表达。改进建议:在口语和正式书写中,年龄常用数字或单词均可,但在书面英语中写作'six'更常见。
× As a man. Our school teach us how to type in the computer classes and it's really a great time.
✓ As a child, our school taught us how to type in computer classes, and it was really a great time.
错误类型为代词/人称及主谓一致和时态问题(第12项、第27项、第5项)。说明:原句“As a man.”不合上下文,应该是“as a child/when I was young”;主句中“school teach us”主谓不一致,过去时应为“taught”;后半句时态与过去一致应为“it was”。改进建议:根据语境选择正确的短语(如'as a child');注意主语与动词的数和时态一致,叙述过去经历时使用过去时。
× It's really interesting.
✓ It was really interesting.
错误类型为现在时/过去时选择(第6项)。说明:如果说的是过去的经历,形容词句应使用过去时“was”;若是一般事实可用“is”。改进建议:保持时态一致:描述过去经历用过去时。
× In my opinion, I think I improve my typing through the everydays tied to my friends and my family.
✓ In my opinion, I improved my typing through everyday practice with my friends and family.
错误类型为动词+ -ing形式和词汇搭配(第8项)。说明:表述不清,“everydays tied to my friends”不合逻辑;如果想说通过与家人朋友的日常练习提高,应使用'everyday practice with my friends and family';时态根据上下文应为过去或现在完成。改进建议:用'practice'或'practicing'表示练习,使用正确的介词'with'来表示与某人一起。
× Just only this as they all say that practice every day and you get a better skill.
✓ That's all; they all say that if you practice every day, you will get better skills.
错误类型为限定词/词序和句子结构(第14项与第26项)。说明:'Just only this as'不符合英语表达,应简化为'That's all'或'Just that'; 条件句需要if引导,时态和结果应一致,'a better skill'更自然为'better skills'或'a better skill'取决语境。改进建议:使用条件句(if)表达“练习会带来进步”,注意限定词不要重复('just only'),并改正名词复数形式。