Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "my edit") and minor grammatical errors.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it’s faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly edit documents and share them with classmates online, which saves time when we work on group projects.

Gợi ý: Provide a clearer topic sentence and a precise reason. Use correct grammar and a linking word to connect the reason. Replace vague phrases like "it's opening quickly" with accurate expressions.

Ví dụ: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my laptop boots up faster than a desktop. Also, it’s more portable, so I can work in different places like the library or a café.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a direct answer about timing, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct minor grammar and unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: I learned to type in primary school when we had weekly computer classes. The teacher gave regular practice exercises, which helped me build speed and accuracy early on.

Gợi ý: Give a clearer structure: state the main method, then specify how you practice with examples. Remove repetition and improve grammar (e.g., "use every day" not "use everyday").

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing every day. For instance, I write short journal entries about my studies and daily routines, and I also use online typing exercises to increase speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient and I can share my edit with others easily.

✓ I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient, and I can share my edits with others easily.

The noun 'edit' is countable here and refers to the results of editing; the correct plural is 'edits'. Also a comma before 'and' improves sentence clarity when joining two independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'edits' when speaking generally about multiple instances and add a comma to separate clauses.

× I use laptop keyboard every day because it's opening quickly rather than computer or a desktop.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because it boots up more quickly than a desktop computer.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' (article error). The phrase 'it's opening quickly' is incorrect; use 'it boots up' or 'it starts up' for computers. 'Rather than computer or a desktop' has wrong word order and missing article; correct comparison is 'more quickly than a desktop computer.' Suggestion: include appropriate articles and use correct verbs for device start-up and standard comparative structure.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard back in primary school because we had computer classes weekly and our teacher was very knowledgeable and she was teaching practice every week.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard back in primary school because we had weekly computer classes and our teacher was very knowledgeable and gave us practice every week.

'Computer classes weekly' is awkwardly ordered; use 'weekly computer classes' (sentence structure/word order). 'She was teaching practice every week' is incorrect tense/structure; use simple past 'gave us practice' to match 'we had' and 'I learned.' Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for past events and use natural collocations like 'weekly computer classes' and 'gave us practice.'

× So it was really helpful lesson for me and I learned how to type on the keyboard.

✓ So it was a really helpful lesson for me, and I learned how to type on the keyboard.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'really helpful lesson' (article error). Also add a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses for clarity. Suggestion: include articles where required and punctuate compound sentences appropriately.

× I improve my typing by practicing every day because I usually write something about educational things or daily habits, so I usually use everyday to improve my typing.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day because I usually write about educational topics or my daily habits, so I use every day to practice and improve my typing.

'Write something about educational things' is awkward; 'write about educational topics' is clearer (word choice). 'Use everyday' is incorrect: 'everyday' as one word is an adjective meaning 'ordinary'; you need the phrase 'every day' (two words) meaning 'each day', and the verb phrase should be 'use every day to practice' or simply 'practice every day.' Also repetition of 'usually' is redundant. Suggestion: use 'every day' (two words) for frequency, avoid 'everyday' as adjective here, and simplify to 'practice every day.'