Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Actually handwriting because that can help me to concentrate in make notes or reading book that can help me absorb information from the book more clearly and efficiently and and I think handwriting can improve my own capability of writing. That is a really good way for me.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Actually the laptop keyboard. One reason is that I just have a laptop. The other reason is that I think laptop is really convenient for me because when I go out, if I somehow have some nervous things have to do, I just use it. That is really convenient.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Actually, when I going to university, I still remember that the first class of computer is how to type in more quickly and currently. So I think, uh, if I practice more, I can improve my own currency.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Actually a user website named typing that is a really good website for me to practice more about the typing scale and I think that can help me to improve my typing skill more currently and quickly.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like "improve my own capability of writing."
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting. Firstly, writing notes by hand helps me concentrate and remember information better. Secondly, handwriting improves my ability to organize ideas, so I find it useful for studying.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and more natural phrasing. Replace vague or awkward expressions (e.g. "nervous things have to do") with specific situations. Use one linking phrase to add the second reason.
Ví dụ: I use a laptop keyboard every day. I mainly use a laptop because it's the device I own, and it is convenient for working on the move. For example, I can quickly type emails or assignments while commuting.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: Correct verb tense and word choice, and make the response specific and coherent. Begin with a clear time reference, then describe the class briefly and a result. Avoid unclear words like "currently" and "currency."
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I started university. In our first computer class, we practiced touch-typing to increase speed and accuracy, and since then I have improved by regular practice.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Name the resource clearly and explain how you use it. Use linking words to describe frequency or method, and use correct collocations (e.g. "typing speed/skill").
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by using an online site called Typing.com. I practice on it for 20 minutes every day because its lessons and timed tests help me increase my typing speed and accuracy quickly.
× Actually handwriting because that can help me to concentrate in make notes or reading book that can help me absorb information from the book more clearly and efficiently and and I think handwriting can improve my own capability of writing.
✓ Actually, handwriting helps me concentrate when I take notes or read books; it helps me absorb information more clearly and efficiently, and I think handwriting can improve my writing ability.
Errors: run-on sentence and incorrect conjunction use leading to unclear structure; incorrect verb forms and noun forms ('make notes' -> 'take notes', 'reading book' -> 'read books'), redundant words ('and and'), awkward phrasing ('capability of writing'). Suggestion: Break the run-on into clearer clauses, use appropriate verbs and plural nouns, remove redundancy, and use natural collocations like 'take notes' and 'writing ability'.
× Actually the laptop keyboard.
✓ Actually, the laptop keyboard.
Error: missing punctuation and lacking a complete sentence context; the phrase is acceptable as a short answer but needs a comma after 'Actually' for natural speech transcription. No article error in content but ensure punctuation for clarity.
× One reason is that I just have a laptop.
✓ One reason is that I only have a laptop.
Error: use of 'just' is awkward here; 'only' is the correct quantifier to indicate exclusivity. Suggestion: Replace 'just' with 'only' for natural English.
× The other reason is that I think laptop is really convenient for me because when I go out, if I somehow have some nervous things have to do, I just use it.
✓ The other reason is that I think the laptop is very convenient for me because when I go out and have tasks to do, I can just use it.
Errors: missing definite article before 'laptop' ('the laptop'), awkward phrase 'some nervous things have to do' (unclear). Suggestion: Use 'have tasks to do' or 'need to do something', and change 'I just use it' to 'I can just use it' for modal clarity.
× Actually, when I going to university, I still remember that the first class of computer is how to type in more quickly and currently.
✓ Actually, when I went to university, I still remember that the first computer class was about how to type more quickly and accurately.
Errors: incorrect verb form 'going' should be past 'went' to match timeframe; tense inconsistency ('is' -> 'was'); awkward adverb 'currently' inappropriate here; 'type in more quickly' -> 'type more quickly' and 'accurately' is a better collocation. Suggestion: Use past tense for past events and choose appropriate adverbs.
× So I think, uh, if I practice more, I can improve my own currency.
✓ So I think if I practice more, I can improve my current skills.
Errors: 'currency' is incorrect word choice (wrong noun); 'own' is unnecessary. Suggestion: Use 'current skills' or 'typing speed/ability' depending on intended meaning, and remove filler words for clarity.
× Actually a user website named typing that is a really good website for me to practice more about the typing scale and I think that can help me to improve my typing skill more currently and quickly.
✓ Actually, a website called Typing.com is a really good place for me to practice typing, and I think it can help me improve my typing skills quickly.
Errors: missing punctuation, awkward noun phrase 'a user website named typing', unnecessary repetition 'website' twice, incorrect phrase 'practice more about the typing scale', singular/plural and article issues ('typing skill' -> 'typing skills'), awkward adverb placement 'more currently and quickly'. Suggestion: Use the correct name or phrase for the site, simplify the sentence, use plural 'skills', and place adverbs ('quickly') at the end.