Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer typing because it's much faster for me and I can edit text easily for example and type emails and the school agreements every day and that saves a lot of time. But sometimes I handwrite not when I study because it helps me remember things better.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Well, I usually tap on a laptop cable every day because I work on my laptop at home and university for example. I read emails and do homework on it, and sometimes I'm usually a desktop at home when I need a bigger screen.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Well, I learned how to tap on a cable when I was about 12. I learned it at school during computer class and the teacher shouted us some exams so I practice a lot now. I'm use typing every day for homework and chatting.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Well, I improve my typing by practicing on a typing website and doing daily during because it helps me build speed and for example I use a typing app for 15 minutes every day.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁有条理,避免重复和语法错误。开头给出明确观点,然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持,注意连词使用与句子结构(如“for example”位置、否定结构)。可以改正时态和搭配错误,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is much faster and makes editing easier. For example, I type emails and school documents every day, which saves a lot of time. However, I sometimes handwrite notes when studying because it helps me remember information better.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 注意用词和搭配,避免“tap on a laptop cable”等错误表达。回答应直接交代主要设备,随后用1–2个具体情境支持,使用连接词保持连贯。修正语法(时态和冠词)并删除多余重复词。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop because I work on it at home and at university. For example, I read emails and do homework on the laptop, although I sometimes use a desktop when I need a larger screen.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要校正词汇和语法错误,说明具体时间点并简要描述学习过程。避免不正确的短语(如“tap on a cable”、“shouted us”),改为合适动词和时态,使句子更自然。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about 12 during computer class at school. The teacher gave us typing tests, so I practiced a lot, and now I use typing every day for homework and chatting.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答应更流畅、语法正确并使用连词连接细节。说明具体方法、频率和效果,并避免语序混乱(如“doing daily during”)。给出明确练习时间和结果会更具体。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing on a typing website and using an app for about 15 minutes every day. This daily practice helps me build speed and reduce errors.
× Well, I prefer typing because it's much faster for me and I can edit text easily for example and type emails and the school agreements every day and that saves a lot of time.
✓ Well, I prefer typing because it's much faster for me and I can edit text easily, for example, type emails and school agreements every day, which saves a lot of time.
句子中有一些用词和连接处不自然:1) “edit text easily for example and type emails and the school agreements every day” 中的“for example”位置不当,且“and”连接项混乱;2) 用“which saves a lot of time”替代“and that saves a lot of time”更符合英语习惯。建议将举例用逗号隔开并放在合适位置,使用非限制性定语从句或连接词使句子更流畅。
× But sometimes I handwrite not when I study because it helps me remember things better.
✓ But sometimes I handwrite when I study because it helps me remember things better.
原句中否定词位置错误导致语义混乱('handwrite not when I study' 应为肯定)。正确表达是说“有时我在学习时手写,因为它能帮助我更好地记住东西”。建议将否定去掉并把时间状语放在动词之后或句末。
× Well, I usually tap on a laptop cable every day because I work on my laptop at home and university for example.
✓ Well, I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because I work on my laptop at home and at university, for example.
原句中“tap on a laptop cable”使用了错误的名词和介词:应为“type on a laptop keyboard”。此外“at home and university”需要在“university”前加介词“at”,并将“for example”放在句末或用逗号分隔以示举例。建议区分“keyboard”和“cable”,并正确使用介词短语。
× I read emails and do homework on it, and sometimes I'm usually a desktop at home when I need a bigger screen.
✓ I read emails and do homework on it, and sometimes I usually use a desktop at home when I need a bigger screen.
原句“I'm usually a desktop”结构错误,把人和设备混淆。应使用动词“use”来表示“使用台式机”。另外“sometimes”与“usually”连用冗余,建议保留一个(此处保留“sometimes usually”改为“sometimes I usually use”也可精简为“sometimes I use”)。
× Well, I learned how to tap on a cable when I was about 12.
✓ Well, I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was about 12.
动词“learn how to ...”后接不定式正确,但原句使用了错误的动词“tap on a cable”且名词不当。应为“type on a keyboard”。建议把不定式与正确名词搭配,避免字面翻译导致的词不达意。
× I learned it at school during computer class and the teacher shouted us some exams so I practice a lot now.
✓ I learned it at school during computer class; the teacher gave us some tests, so I practiced a lot then and now I use typing every day.
原句有多处结构和时态混乱:1) “the teacher shouted us some exams” 是错误表达,应为“gave us some tests”或“set some exams”;2) 时态不一致,“so I practice a lot now” 与前句过去时冲突,应区分过去的练习和现在的习惯。建议将句子分为两部分,用分号或连接词并确保时态一致。
× I'm use typing every day for homework and chatting.
✓ I use typing every day for homework and chatting.
原句把“I'm use”误用为“be + use”,正确结构是动词短语“I use ...”。请注意“use”应作为谓语动词直接使用,或用“I'm used to typing”表示习惯(若要强调习惯应写成“I'm used to typing every day”)。
× Well, I improve my typing by practicing on a typing website and doing daily during because it helps me build speed and for example I use a typing app for 15 minutes every day.
✓ Well, I improve my typing by practicing on a typing website daily because it helps me build speed; for example, I use a typing app for 15 minutes every day.
原句中“and doing daily during”结构混乱,应直接使用副词“daily”或短语“by practicing ... daily”。将举例用分号或逗号分开更清晰。建议使用“by + -ing”结构正确表达方式,并去掉多余词汇使句子连贯。