Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I'd say typing, whether it's for work or in daily life. I usually use my computer or phone to talk to friends and coworkers so I end up typing most of the time.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I use a desktop every day. My work needs it. I have to communicate with my coworkers and the influencers I work with on a daily basis.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned it in primary school doing computer class. The teacher showed us how to use a computer and how to type, like where to put our fingers on the keyboard correctly.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Actually, I never really practice typing intentionally, but in my daily work I need to do a lot of communication with people on the computer. I think that's when I improved my typing skills without even noticing it.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 86.0Gợi ý: 回答自然且直接,但可以增加一两句具体比较和原因以丰富内容并展示词汇多样性。比如说明在速度、方便性或记忆方面的优缺点,并用连接词衔接观点。注意每题不超过五句。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient for everyday communication. For example, I can quickly send messages or edit text on my phone or computer, which saves time. However, handwriting can be better for remembering information or doing creative work, so I use it sometimes for notes.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁但略显重复与笼统。建议加入具体细节说明为什么工作需要台式机(例如性能、屏幕尺寸、外设),并用连接词自然衔接理由。保持不超过五句。
Ví dụ: I use a desktop computer every day because my job requires handling large files and multi-tasking, which is easier on a big screen. Also, I connect professional peripherals like a mechanical keyboard and high-resolution monitor, which improves my productivity when coordinating with coworkers and influencers.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且具体,但可以补充时间或年龄细节以及学习过程的简短评价,体现回忆和比较,从而更丰富答案。用连词连接句子会更流畅。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in primary school during computer class when I was about eight years old. The teacher taught us proper finger placement and basic typing exercises, which helped me build a solid foundation early on.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 84.0Gợi ý: 内容合理但过于简单。建议补充具体如何通过工作练习提升(例如频率、类型的任务或使用的工具),并说明计划或方法以展示主动性。使用连接词使论述连贯。
Ví dụ: I haven't practiced typing formally; instead, I improved it through constant daily use at work, typing messages and emails several hours a day. Lately, I've also started using online typing tests and short drills to increase my speed and accuracy.
× I learned it in primary school doing computer class.
✓ I learned it in primary school during computer class.
句中“doing computer class”搭配不自然。根据语法问题类型8(动词+-ing形式),此处不应使用动名词短语“doing computer class”,而应使用介词短语“during computer class”或“in computer class”。建议改为“during computer class”或“in computer class”以表达“在上电脑课时学会的”。
× Actually, I never really practice typing intentionally, but in my daily work I need to do a lot of communication with people on the computer.
✓ Actually, I never really practiced typing intentionally, but in my daily work I needed to do a lot of communication with people on the computer.
原句时态不一致。问题类型6(现在时问题)指出讲述过去学会与提高的经历时应使用过去时。学生在描述过去的习惯或经历(如何提高打字)时,应使用过去时态“practiced”和“needed”。如果想保留现在时,需明确表示这是现在的情况。建议根据上下文将动词改为过去式以保持时态一致。
× I usually use my computer or phone to talk to friends and coworkers so I end up typing most of the time.
✓ I usually use my computer or phone to talk to friends and coworkers, so I end up typing most of the time.
原句缺少逗号导致复合句中主从句连接不清晰。问题类型27(主谓一致错误/句子结构错误)在此归为句子结构问题,需在两个独立分句之间加逗号或连词,使句子更清晰。建议在“coworkers”和“so”之间加逗号。
× My work needs it.
✓ My work requires it.
“need”作动词时与抽象名词“work”搭配不够自然,且“needs it”可能引起歧义。问题类型2(第三人称单数问题)提示注意动词形式与主语一致。动词形式虽然已是第三人称单数,但更自然的表达是“requires it”或“my work requires me to use it”。建议改为“requires it”或更明确地说“my work requires me to use a desktop every day”。