Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
It depends the situation and what I'm writing for. When it's for assignment or daily message I choose I prefer to typing. But it's for personal notes or diary. I prefer to handwriting because I like to use nice notebooks and pens.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I rarely used desktop or laptop keyboard because I think handwriting will umm more memorable to me and also help me more focused on.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learn how to type on a keyboard when I'm in the primary school because we have a computer class where can teach our skills for typing.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I usually typing every day and I think the more I tap the more faster and the more accurate I get. And also I find that touching type can make a big difference.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答应更自然、句子结构更完整,避免重复并用连接词让表达连贯。可以先直接给出偏好,再解释原因并举例。注意语法(时态、人称一致、冠词)和词序。
Ví dụ: I usually prefer typing for assignments and messages because it's faster and easier to edit. However, for personal notes or a diary I prefer handwriting, since I enjoy using nice notebooks and pens and find writing by hand more personal and memorable.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需更直接明确,同时修正语法错误并去掉口头语(umm)。用连接词说明原因并给出频率细节。注意动词时态和形容词比较形式。
Ví dụ: I rarely use a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I often find handwriting more memorable and it helps me stay more focused. I usually type only when I have to submit assignments or send long emails.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要用正确的过去时,并补充具体时间或年龄。修正从句语序并提供简短细节,例如课程内容或练习方式以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in primary school, around the age of eight, when we had a weekly computer class. The teacher taught us basic typing skills and we practised with simple exercises and games.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要用更准确的语法和词汇,句子不宜冗长。说明具体方法(例如练习软件、速度与准确性练习)并使用连接词解释效果。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising every day with online typing drills that focus on speed and accuracy. The more I practise, the faster and more accurate I become, and learning touch typing has made a big difference.
× It depends the situation and what I'm writing for.
✓ It depends on the situation and what I'm writing for.
句子缺少介词短语的介词“on”。正确结构是“depend on something”。建议记住短语搭配:“depend on”。
× When it's for assignment or daily message I choose I prefer to typing.
✓ When it's for an assignment or a daily message, I prefer typing.
句子存在多处问题:1) 名词前缺不定冠词“an/a”(assignment, daily message为可数名词单数),应为“an assignment”或“a daily message”。2) 使用了多余动词“choose”和不正确的动词形式“to typing”。正确表达只需使用“prefer + -ing”或“prefer to + 动词原形”。建议改为“I prefer typing”或“I prefer to type”。
× But it's for personal notes or diary. I prefer to handwriting because I like to use nice notebooks and pens.
✓ But if it's for personal notes or a diary, I prefer handwriting because I like to use nice notebooks and pens.
原句结构不完整并且有词类使用错误:1) 第一句是片段,应补上条件连词“if”使其成为完整句子。2) “diary”为可数名词,前面应加冠词“a”。3) “prefer to handwriting”中“handwriting”是名词或动名词,但与“prefer to”结构不匹配,正确使用是“prefer handwriting”或“prefer to handwrite”。建议使用“prefer handwriting”或“prefer to handwrite”。
× I rarely used desktop or laptop keyboard because I think handwriting will umm more memorable to me and also help me more focused on.
✓ I rarely use a desktop or laptop keyboard because I think handwriting is more memorable to me and also helps me stay more focused.
存在时态和搭配问题:1) “rarely used”应为一般现在时“rarely use”。2) 名词前缺冠词,应为“a desktop or laptop keyboard”。3) “handwriting will umm more memorable to me”结构不正确,描述现在常态应使用“is more memorable”。4) “help me more focused on”不符合英语表达,应改为“helps me stay more focused”或“helps me focus more”。建议注意时态一致并使用正确动词搭配。
× I learn how to type on a keyboard when I'm in the primary school because we have a computer class where can teach our skills for typing.
✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school because we had a computer class that taught typing skills.
时间和时态不一致:描述过去经历应使用过去时,所以“I learn”改为“learned/learnt”,“I'm in the primary school”改为“I was in primary school”。此外,定语从句结构错误,“where can teach our skills for typing”应改为“that taught typing skills”或“where we were taught typing skills”。建议掌握过去时的使用及定语从句的正确结构。
× I usually typing every day and I think the more I tap the more faster and the more accurate I get.
✓ I usually type every day, and I think the more I practice, the faster and more accurate I become.
动词形式错误:1) “I usually typing”应为一般现在时“I usually type”。2) 原句比较结构“the more I tap the more faster and the more accurate I get”不正确,重复比较词且“faster”已是比较级不应再加“more”。建议使用标准的比较结构“The more... the more...”例如“the more I practice, the faster and more accurate I become”。
× And also I find that touching type can make a big difference.
✓ Also, I find that touch typing can make a big difference.
词汇搭配错误:“touching type”是不正确的短语,正确术语为“touch typing”(盲打)。同时句首重复连接词“And also”冗余,可用“Also”或“And”。建议学习常用专业短语并避免冗余连词。