Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I'm prefer typing role in these moments. May most of us must to choose typing as our type as our major ways to contact with others peoples online. And maybe we just choose have white when we have exam divers this time.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Definitely I must finish my articles online, especially through my laptop and we also chat with others people through my mobile phone, especially in the WeChat. So we must type on the keyboard to chat with others people or finish my works.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Uh, in China, May, most of children will attend in the primary school and the Chinese teacher will teach them how to use the keyboard to type. And that was the first time I have contact with the keyboard to type. Yeah, I guess most people would win.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Nothing particular there are not there are no empty skills to how to improve your typing skills in my opinion, but we just practice everyday because it became the most the most frequent, currently major ways to contact with others.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接表明偏好,句子要语法正确并尽量简洁。说明原因时用具体细节并使用连接词(because, so, therefore)使逻辑清楚。避免重复和不必要的词语,控制在最多五句话内。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient for online communication. For example, I can quickly send messages and edit documents on my laptop or phone. Therefore, typing has become my main way of communicating with others.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答(Yes/No + which),然后给一两句具体细节说明频率和用途。注意主谓一致和代词用法,使用连接词(for example, so)使回答连贯。控制在五句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I type on my laptop almost every day because I write articles and study online. I also often type on my smartphone to chat with friends on WeChat, so I use keyboards for both work and social communication.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答应直接说明时间(例如:at primary school/when I was X years old),然后给出具体背景细节。避免模糊词和多余插入语,使用连接词(then, after that)保持逻辑。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school, around age seven. My teacher introduced basic keyboard skills in computer class, and that was my first time practicing typing regularly.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答方法(例如:practice, use typing software),然后给出具体做法和频率。使用连接词(for example, by, so)并尽量用准确短语(practice daily, use typing tutors)。避免重复,控制句数。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly by practicing every day and using online typing tutors. For example, I spend 15 minutes daily on typing drills and play typing games to increase speed and accuracy.
× I'm prefer typing role in these moments.
✓ I prefer typing at the moment.
类型ID:6(现在时问题)和26(句子结构错误)。原句中使用了’m prefer‘是不正确的助动词+动词形式,正确用法为‘I prefer...’同时‘role’和‘in these moments’用词不当。建议使用现在时简单陈述“prefer”并改为固定搭配“at the moment”(此刻)。简明建议:去掉多余的助动词“'m”,把“role”删除或替换为合适词,使用“at the moment”。
× May most of us must to choose typing as our type as our major ways to contact with others peoples online.
✓ Maybe most of us must choose typing as our main way to contact other people online.
类型ID:6(现在时问题)、11(介词/用词)、14(量词/方式表达)、22(冠词问题)和1(单复数问题)。原句“May”应为“Maybe”;“must to choose”中“to”不应出现;“type as our type as our major ways”重复且用词错误,应为“main way”;“others peoples”复数和词形错误,应为“other people”。建议使用“Maybe most of us must choose typing as our main way to contact other people online.”。
× And maybe we just choose have white when we have exam divers this time.
✓ And maybe we just use handwriting when we have exams this time.
类型ID:22(冠词/词形)和11(介词/用词)。原句中“choose have white”是词不达意,推测想表达“使用手写(handwriting)”;“exam divers”应为“exams”或“during exams”。建议改为“use handwriting when we have exams”或更自然的“when we take exams”。
× Definitely I must finish my articles online, especially through my laptop and we also chat with others people through my mobile phone, especially in the WeChat.
✓ I definitely have to finish my articles online, especially on my laptop, and we also chat with other people on WeChat using our phones.
类型ID:4(情态动词用法)、26(句子结构)和12(代词使用)。原句“I must finish my articles online”可改为“I have to”更自然;“through my laptop”应为“on my laptop”;“others people”应为“other people”;“in the WeChat”错误,应为“on WeChat”。建议注意情态动词短语、介词搭配和代词一致性。
× So we must type on the keyboard to chat with others people or finish my works.
✓ So we must type on the keyboard to chat with other people or finish my work.
类型ID:12(代词使用)和1(单复数问题)。原句人称不一致:先用“we”又用“my works”。应统一为“we... finish our work”或改为“I... finish my work”。“others people”改为“other people”,“works”改为不可数“work”或“tasks”。
× Uh, in China, May, most of children will attend in the primary school and the Chinese teacher will teach them how to use the keyboard to type.
✓ Uh, in China, at age five, most children attend primary school and their Chinese teacher teaches them how to use the keyboard to type.
类型ID:3(There be问题不直接但时间表达问题)、11(介词/用词)、6(现在时问题)和27(主谓一致)。原句“May”可能想说“五岁(age five)”或“May(五月)”,根据语境改为“at age five”。“attend in the primary school”应为“attend primary school”或“go to primary school”;“the Chinese teacher will teach”时态与习惯性事实应使用一般现在时“teaches”;“most of children”应为“most children”。建议改为一般现在时并修正介词。
× And that was the first time I have contact with the keyboard to type.
✓ And that was the first time I had contact with a keyboard to type.
类型ID:5(过去时问题)和9(过去分词/完成时)。原句中混用过去式“was”与现在完成时“have contact”冲突。描述过去经历应全用过去式或过去完成时:这里用过去式“had”。同时“the keyboard”改为不定冠词“a keyboard”更自然。建议时态保持一致。
× Yeah, I guess most people would win.
✓ Yeah, I guess most people would agree.
类型ID:26(句子结构错误)和11(词汇使用)。原句“would win”与上下文不通,推测想说“大多数人会这样认为/同意”,应为“would agree”。建议根据语境选择正确动词。
× Nothing particular there are not there are no empty skills to how to improve your typing skills in my opinion, but we just practice everyday because it became the most the most frequent, currently major ways to contact with others.
✓ Nothing in particular; there aren't any special skills on how to improve your typing skills, in my opinion. We just practice every day because it has become the most frequent and currently the main way to contact others.
类型ID:26(句子结构)、4(情态/否定形式)、11(介词/用词)、6(现在时问题)和14(量词/方式)。原句重复、双重否定和词序混乱,应拆成两句并改正否定表达“there aren't any...”,用“on how to”或“for improving”更自然;“everyday”(形容词)应为副词短语“every day”;“it became”应为现在完成/现在时“it has become”或“it is”来表示现状;“the most the most frequent, currently major ways to contact with others”重复且介词错误,应为“the most frequent and currently the main way to contact others”。建议简化句子、修正否定和时态一致。