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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

I prefer typing because I fear that I usually use my laptop to write notes, so I'm quite get used to it. But handwriting, uh, my, my character picture is not quite good. I look so I think I prefer typing.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

And nowadays I usually use my laptop because I, uh, began to use to walk outside in a cafeteria or a library. So I think my laptop is very, uh, portable and the keyboard is very small. So I think it's better for me to tap on that.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

I think it's my, uh, primary school because we have a computer, uh, lessons and the, the computer teacher asked us to learn how to tap on the desktop. And I've, uh, there's some homework, uh, I need, we need to do.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

Things I was primary school student. We usually, uh, use the computer typing games to improve our accuracy and the speed, but nowadays we usually just, uh, tapping and tapping. I don't know how to prove it.

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Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、句子更流畅并直接回应问题。注意语法(例如时态和固定搭配),减少停顿词和重复。可先给出主题句,然后用一两句具体原因支撑,使用连接词如 because / so / therefore。发音上注意连读和清晰度。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because I usually take notes on my laptop, so I've become accustomed to it. Handwriting is also quite slow for me and my penmanship isn’t neat, so typing is more efficient.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答应直接开门见山,然后给出具体原因并使用连词让表达更连贯。注意用词准确(e.g. 'portable'、'small keyboard'),避免重复和语填词。可说明场景和频率来丰富内容。

Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop because I often work in cafés or libraries. The laptop is very portable and its keyboard is compact, which makes it convenient for me to carry around and use on the go.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答应使用清晰的时间表达并减少犹豫词。先说明时间点,然后具体说明学习方式和原因。用完整句并用连接词如 because / when / so 来组织信息。

Ví dụ: I learned to type in primary school when we had computer lessons. Our teacher taught us basic typing skills and gave homework to practice typing on the desktop.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更具体并展示现在的改进方法或计划。避免模糊表达和语法错误,使用连词说明过去与现在的对比,并给出具体例子(例如 typing drills, online courses, practice apps)。用肯定句表达正在做或打算做的事情。

Ví dụ: When I was in primary school, we improved our typing with computer typing games to build speed and accuracy. Now I try to practise regularly by doing online typing exercises and timed tests to maintain and improve my speed.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I prefer typing because I fear that I usually use my laptop to write notes, so I'm quite get used to it.

I prefer typing because I usually use my laptop to write notes, so I'm quite used to it.

句子中时态和用法不一致。原句“I fear that I usually use...”中的“I fear”与上下文不匹配,且“I'm quite get used to it”是不正确的被动/状态表达。改为“I usually use...”表示习惯,现在完成的状态用“I'm quite used to it”或“I am quite used to it”。建议直接用一般现在时描述习惯,并用“be used to”后接名词或动名词。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× But handwriting, uh, my, my character picture is not quite good.

But my handwriting isn't very good.

原句中“my character picture”是错误的代词和词汇搭配。这里要表达“我的字写得不好”,应使用“handwriting”或“my handwriting”作为主语,谓语用否定缩写“isn't”并加形容词“very good”。建议简化句子并使用正确名词“handwriting”。

Sentence structure errors

× I look so I think I prefer typing.

So I think I prefer typing.

原句“I look so I think...”结构混乱,‘I look’没有明确意义,导致句子结构错误。删去多余部分并用“So I think I prefer typing.”来表达结论。建议说话时注意句子主干,去掉多余短语。

Present tense issue

× And nowadays I usually use my laptop because I, uh, began to use to walk outside in a cafeteria or a library.

Nowadays I usually use my laptop because I began to take it with me to cafés or the library.

原句时态和动词搭配不当:“began to use to walk outside”不符合英语表达。应使用“began to take it with me”或“got used to taking it out”表示开始带着笔记本外出;“cafeteria”或“café”选择其一。建议用简单过去“began”或现在完成“have begun/started”配合“take it with me”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× So I think my laptop is very, uh, portable and the keyboard is very small.

So I think my laptop is very portable and the keyboard is quite small.

原句中使用“very”两次显得重复且口语犹豫音“uh”应去掉。用“quite small”或“relatively small”更自然。建议避免重复过多程度副词,保持表达简洁。

Sentence structure errors

× So I think it's better for me to tap on that.

So I think it's better for me to type on it.

“tap on that”用词不当且指代不清。正确应使用“type on it”表示在笔记本上打字;“that”改为指代笔记本的代词“it”。建议使用正确的动词“type”并确保代词指代明确。

There be issue

× I think it's my, uh, primary school because we have a computer, uh, lessons and the, the computer teacher asked us to learn how to tap on the desktop.

I think it was in primary school because we had computer lessons and the computer teacher asked us to learn how to type on the desktop.

描述过去经历应使用过去时态:“I think it was in primary school”和“we had computer lessons”。“tap on the desktop”用词错误,应为“type on the desktop”。建议把动词改为“type”,并将动词时态改为过去时。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× And I've, uh, there's some homework, uh, I need, we need to do.

And there was some homework we needed to do.

原句“I've, uh, there's some homework, I need, we need to do”混用现在完成和存在句,且主语不一致。描述过去的作业应用过去时:“there was some homework we needed to do”或“If referring to present, use 'there is some homework we need to do'。”建议保持时态一致,合并主语与动词。

Tense issue

× Things I was primary school student.

When I was a primary school student,

原句缺乏连词和完整主干,句子碎片化。应使用“When I was a primary school student,”引出从句。建议完整表达时间状语从句并跟上主体句。

Verb + -ing form

× We usually, uh, use the computer typing games to improve our accuracy and the speed, but nowadays we usually just, uh, tapping and tapping.

We usually used computer typing games to improve our accuracy and speed, but nowadays we usually just keep tapping.

时态与动名词使用错误。描述过去习惯应用过去时“used”,并且“typing games”前不需要“the”。后半句“just tapping and tapping”需使用动词短语“keep tapping”或“just tap a lot”。建议根据时间对比使用正确时态,并用恰当的动词形式。

Sentence structure errors

× I don't know how to prove it.

I don't know how to improve it.

原句使用了错误的动词“prove”,应为“improve”表示“提高、改进”。根据上下文意图是说不知如何改进打字技巧。建议使用语义匹配的动词,避免发音相近但意义不同的词。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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