Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Actually they are both to me. I can accept type and I also can accept handwriting in my. Before I go to university I use the handwriting most, but after now it's the computer used I use type.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, now I use the most is laptop laptop keyboard every day because I'm preparing for the Italian exam and I have my my computer. I just use the laptop keyboard.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
It was when I am on when I was on primary school, we have a computer class. Our teacher taught us how to type and how to use a computer. That's the first time I learn about. I learned about computer that's very.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I remember it on it was on my computer class. It's also on primary school. Our teacher gave let us make let us practice typing on the computer. We use the the table, desk, keyboard. It's very.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并使用更自然的句子结构。要简洁给出立场(prefer typing/handwriting/both),然后用1-2句具体原因或例子支持。注意语法(时态与冠词)和连词,例如 because, since, although。避免重复词汇。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing now, although I used to handwrite a lot before university. Typing is faster and more convenient for taking notes and editing, while handwriting felt more personal when I was younger.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答应直接并流畅。先明确是 laptop,然后给出简短理由并去掉重复。可用连接词 like because 或 since 说明原因,保持句子数不超过五句。注意用词顺序和避免填充词。
Ví dụ: I type mostly on a laptop keyboard every day because I'm preparing for an Italian exam and I use my laptop for studying and practice tasks.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要用正确的时态和简洁句子。先给出明确时间(e.g. in primary school),然后用一两句说明学习方式或感受。避免重复和不完整句子,注意语法(past tense)和连词如 when/while。
Ví dụ: I learnt to type in primary school during computer classes. Our teacher showed us basic typing techniques and exercises, which helped me become comfortable with the keyboard early on.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答应具体说明你现在如何练习提高打字速度或准确性,而不是重复儿童时期的经历。可以提到具体方法(online typing tests, practice drills, touch-typing courses)并用连接词使逻辑连贯。注意句子完整性和词汇准确性。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by doing online typing exercises and timed tests a few times a week. I also practise touch-typing lessons and try to correct errors immediately to increase my speed and accuracy.
× Actually they are both to me.
✓ Actually they are both fine for me.
原句中“to me”用法不自然,常用表达为“fine for me”或“both of them suit me”。建议改为“both fine for me”以符合英语习惯。
× I can accept type and I also can accept handwriting in my.
✓ I can accept typing and I can also accept handwriting.
原句中名词形式和量词使用不当:应使用动名词“typing”而不是“type”。句尾“in my”无意义,应去掉。建议使用并列结构“I can accept X and I can also accept Y”。
× Before I go to university I use the handwriting most, but after now it's the computer used I use type.
✓ Before I went to university I used handwriting most, but now I use a computer and I type.
时态和句子结构混乱。事件发生在过去,应使用过去式“went/used”。“handwriting most”应为“used handwriting most”。“after now it's the computer used I use type”不合语法,改为现在时“now I use a computer and I type”。建议分两句表达并调整时态。
× Yes, now I use the most is laptop laptop keyboard every day because I'm preparing for the Italian exam and I have my my computer.
✓ Yes, now I mostly use a laptop keyboard every day because I'm preparing for the Italian exam and I have my computer with me.
原句中“the most is laptop laptop keyboard”重复且语序错误,应为“mostly use a laptop keyboard”。“my my computer”有重复,应为“my computer”。建议简化并正确排列修饰语。
× I just use the laptop keyboard.
✓ I just use the laptop keyboard.
句子本身语法正确,但在上下文中可保留为强调性陈述,无需改动。
× It was when I am on when I was on primary school, we have a computer class.
✓ It was when I was in primary school; we had a computer class.
原句时态混用,“was when I am on when I was on primary school”不通顺。应使用过去时“was in primary school”且“have”改为过去式“had”。注意介词应为“in primary school”。
× Our teacher taught us how to type and how to use a computer.
✓ Our teacher taught us how to type and how to use a computer.
句子语法正确,为过去时,保持不变。
× That's the first time I learn about.
✓ That was the first time I learned about it.
表达与时态不一致。既然指过去的第一次经历,应使用过去时“was”并将“learn”改为过去式“learned”,同时补上宾语“it”。建议完整表达为“That was the first time I learned about it.”。
× I learned about computer that's very.
✓ I learned about computers; it was very helpful.
原句不完整且句子结尾“that's very”缺乏比较或形容词。应改为完整句子,复数“computers”更自然,并补上形容词如“helpful”。建议将句子改为完整描述。
× I remember it on it was on my computer class.
✓ I remember it was in my computer class.
原句冗余且介词错误。应为“remember it was in my computer class”。去掉多余的“on”。
× It's also on primary school.
✓ It was also in primary school.
同样时态和介词错误。应使用过去时“was”并用“in primary school”。
× Our teacher gave let us make let us practice typing on the computer.
✓ Our teacher let us practice typing on the computer.
原句重复使用动词“gave let us make let us”,造成冗余与结构错误。正确表达为“let us practice”。建议使用简单结构以避免重复。
× We use the the table, desk, keyboard.
✓ We used the table, desk, and keyboard.
原句有“the the”重复且时态应为过去时“used”。并且列举项之间加“and”。建议注意冠词重复并统一时态。
× It's very.
✓ It was very useful.
原句不完整,仅“It’s very”后应接形容词或副词。根据上下文改为“It was very useful”更清楚。建议补全形容词并与时态一致。