Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing because I think it is more convenient than handwriting and. Then it can conclude more information in what? In the same time.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, since I have my own computer I everyday I type on my keyboard and it also help me to improve my typing speed.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned how to type when I was in primary school student. Our school had computer class and it concludes typing exercises.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Just take more exercise. Now I'll type every day on my phone, computer, and as I exercise more and more time, my typing skills has also improved.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接和连贯,避免语法错误和多余停顿。先用一句主题句回答问题,然后用1-2句具体理由或例子支持。注意使用连接词(because, so, and)并避免不完整句子。可以改进词汇和句子结构,如将“conclude more information”换为“record more information”或“save more content”。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, when I type I can record more information and easily edit mistakes, so it saves time.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答较清楚但需要更自然的句子结构和正确时态。将时间状语放合适位置,注意主谓一致并使用连词连接原因和结果。可以补充具体例子说明频率或用途以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I have my own computer. Typing daily for emails and schoolwork has helped me improve my speed and accuracy.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需更自然并修正搭配与词汇错误。把时间状语放在合适位置,使用复合句详细说明学习方式或练习内容。用正确词汇替代“concludes”,如“included”。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school. Our school had computer classes that included typing exercises, so I practiced regularly during those lessons.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答应更具体并注意语法(时态、主谓一致)和连贯性。说明具体方法(例如练习软件、速度测试、正确指法),并用连接词(for example, so, therefore)组织句子,避免简单片段。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing every day on my phone and computer. For example, I use online typing exercises and speed tests to track my progress, so my accuracy and speed have gradually improved.
× I prefer typing because I think it is more convenient than handwriting and. Then it can conclude more information in what? In the same time.
✓ I prefer typing because I think it is more convenient than handwriting. It can include more information at the same time.
句子中使用了不恰当的连接词并且句子断裂。原句“and.” 是残缺连接,导致含义不清;“Then it can conclude more information in what?” 结构混乱且单词用法不当。应把句子拆成两句:第一句说明偏好并比较便利性;第二句说明打字能同时包含更多信息,用 include 而非 conclude,短语“at the same time” 表示“同时”。建议写作时避免在句末使用孤立的连词,保持句子完整。
× Yes, since I have my own computer I everyday I type on my keyboard and it also help me to improve my typing speed.
✓ Yes. Since I have my own computer, I type on my keyboard every day and it also helps me to improve my typing speed.
句子时态为现在时,但存在词序和主谓不一致的问题。“everyday” 应为副词短语“every day”(两个词);句中有多余的“I”。动词 help 与单数主语 it 不一致,应为 helps。建议注意副词和形容词的区别(everyday为形容词),并确保主语与动词在人称和数上匹配。
× I learned how to type when I was in primary school student.
✓ I learned how to type when I was a primary school student.
表达过去学习经历,使用过去时 learned 正确,但名词短语“primary school student” 前缺不定冠词 a。英文中表示职业或身份时常用不定冠词。删除多余的“in”或把顺序改为“when I was a primary school student”。建议记住固定结构“be + a/an + 职业/身份”。
× Our school had computer class and it concludes typing exercises.
✓ Our school had a computer class and it included typing exercises.
原句“concludes” 用法不当,conclude 意为“结束/得出结论”,不适合表示“包含”。应使用 include 或 included(过去时,与前句 had 一致)。此外,computer class 前需加不定冠词 a。建议注意动词词义并使时态一致。
× Just take more exercise.
✓ Just practice more.
在此语境中,exercise 作名词或动词皆可,但更自然的表达是 practice(练习)或 do more exercises。短语“take more exercise” 听起来不自然。建议使用常见搭配,如 practice more / do more exercises。
× Now I'll type every day on my phone, computer, and as I exercise more and more time, my typing skills has also improved.
✓ Now I type every day on my phone and computer, and as I practice more, my typing skills have also improved.
句子时间线混合:开头用 Now 应用现在时而不是将来时 I'll;“as I exercise more and more time” 结构错误且词汇不当,应改为 as I practice more;主语复数 typing skills 与动词 has 不一致,应为 have。建议保持时态一致,使用正确搭配(practice more),并确保主谓一致。