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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting is very convenient to us. We can write something anywhere and it is very useful. Moreover, I think handwriting can benefit to our memory and concentration. So, uh, I have a preference in handwriting.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

I think it depends on the situation. The day when I have to do my homework I think I would like to type on a desk desktop and when I have to do some presentations I would like to type on a laptop.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

I think it was a time when I started in the primary school and in this time my teachers taught me a lot of skills on typing and I practiced a lot and so that I can type very fast.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

Umm, I think I improved my typing in a lot of ways, such as I will play some typing games to improve my typing and I will do some practice on typing to improve it.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 76.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并简洁,同时避免赘述和语气词。可以用一到两句明确表明偏好,随后用1–2个具体且有逻辑的理由支持,并用连接词衔接。例如说明方便、随时记录、以及对记忆的具体好处。注意用词准确(例如 “benefit memory” 可说 “help my memory”)。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it’s more convenient and I can write notes anywhere. Also, writing by hand helps me remember information better because the physical act of writing reinforces learning.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁并直接给出通常情况,再用一两句说明例外。避免重复并使用更自然的表达,比如 “usually” 或 “depending on the task”。可以用连接词(however, when)使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Usually I type on a desktop for homework because it’s more comfortable for long typing sessions. However, I use a laptop when I need to work on presentations or when I’m away from home.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更明确地指出时间点并简洁描述学习过程,避免含糊的词组(如 “a time when”)。用过去时态清楚表达,并用连接词说明学习方式和结果。注意句子结构,减少冗长。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school. My teachers taught touch-typing techniques, and after a lot of practice I became quite fast.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 66.0

Gợi ý: 回答需使用一致的时态并避免重复。先给出一个简洁的总体方法,然后列举具体的练习方式,用连接词(for example, such as, also)使结构清晰。删掉填充词(Umm, I think)。

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I play typing games to build speed and accuracy, and I also do daily drills and timed exercises to strengthen my consistency.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting is very convenient to us.

I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting is very convenient for us.

介词用法错误。英语中“convenient”通常搭配介词“for”表示对某人方便,而不是“to”。建议记住常见形容词与介词的固定搭配,如“convenient for”、“useful for”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× We can write something anywhere and it is very useful.

We can write anywhere and it is very useful.

代词/结构冗余问题。句中“write something anywhere”显得啰嗦且“something”不必要,直接用“write anywhere”更自然。建议省略不必要的代词或词组以提高表达简洁性。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Moreover, I think handwriting can benefit to our memory and concentration.

Moreover, I think handwriting can benefit our memory and concentration.

介词使用错误。“benefit”作及物动词时后面不加“to”,正确用法为“benefit someone/something”。建议记住“benefit + 宾语”或“be beneficial to + 宾语”。

Sentence structure errors

× So, uh, I have a preference in handwriting.

So, uh, I prefer handwriting.

句子结构和搭配不自然。“have a preference in handwriting”不如直接用动词短语“prefer handwriting”自然。建议用常见表达简洁地回答偏好问题。

Present tense issue

× I think it depends on the situation.

I think it depends on the situation.

该句时态正确,无需修改。仅为确认:动词“depends”已与主语一致。

Incorrect use of articles

× The day when I have to do my homework I think I would like to type on a desk desktop and when I have to do some presentations I would like to type on a laptop.

On days when I have to do my homework, I prefer to type on a desktop, and when I have to give presentations, I prefer to type on a laptop.

存在冠词和词语搭配错误:“a desk desktop”不正确,应为“a desktop”或“a desktop computer”;时态与习惯表达用一般现在时更合适;“do some presentations”搭配不当,应为“give presentations”。建议使用固定搭配并调整为更自然的句子结构。

Past tense issue

× I think it was a time when I started in the primary school and in this time my teachers taught me a lot of skills on typing and I practiced a lot and so that I can type very fast.

I think it was when I started primary school; at that time my teachers taught me a lot of typing skills, and I practiced a lot so that I could type very fast.

包含多处时态和搭配错误:1) “started in the primary school”应为“started primary school”或“started at primary school”;2) 叙述过去的经历应使用过去时,“can”需改为过去式“could”;3) “skills on typing”不自然,应为“typing skills”;4) 句子过长,需用分号或逗号分开。建议把时间和动作都用过去时并使用自然搭配。

Verb + -ing form

× Umm, I think I improved my typing in a lot of ways, such as I will play some typing games to improve my typing and I will do some practice on typing to improve it.

Umm, I think I improved my typing in a lot of ways; for example, I played some typing games to improve my typing, and I practised typing regularly to improve it.

时态和动名词使用混淆:开头用过去式“improved”,后文却用“will”表达将来,需保持一致使用过去式或一般现在时;“do some practice on typing”不自然,应改为“practised typing”或“did typing practice”;英式拼写为“practised”。建议在描述过去的改善时全部使用过去时,并使用自然的动词搭配如“play typing games”、“practise typing”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FastSpeedy; Secure; Indelible; Promiscuous; Quickly
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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