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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

I prefer typing because typing is more quickly and convenient and I usually chat with my friend use typing.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

Yes I do, I type on my desktop every day because I need to finish my homework and sometimes I need have some online class and in my in my spare time I already chatting in the online with my friend.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

On my grade 7 I can type on a keyboard because in the middle school I need study at the computer such as finish homework or having class. So the typing is a very practical skills and I.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

1st, I usually play some typing games. Second, I replace the handwriting and speaking in the typing way, such as chatting with my friend or finish some homework.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且语法正确。开头直接表明立场,然后用一到两句具体原因支持,避免重复和词形错误。可以使用连词如“because”或“so”连接理由,注意单复数和时态,例如使用“faster”而不是“more quickly”。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. For example, I often chat with my friends and typing saves time.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 句子过长且有重复,语法和词序需改进。先给直接答案,然后列举一至两个简洁具体的原因,使用连接词如“because”或“and”。注意避免重复短语(例如“in my in my”)并使用正确的动词形式(例如“I chat online”)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I type on my desktop every day because I use it to finish homework and attend online classes. I also chat with my friends online in my spare time.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要把时态和逻辑理顺,先说明时间点,再解释原因和背景。避免碎片句和语法错误,注意单复数('skills'前加冠词或改为'skill')并补全未完成的句子。可以用连词如“because”或“so”清楚连接原因。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in Grade 7. In middle school we used computers a lot for homework and classes, so typing became a very useful skill for me.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 结构清晰但句子需更自然和语法准确。用序列词很好,但要注意动词形式和搭配,例如'stop replacing'不必要,改为'by replacing handwriting with typing'。提供具体例子并用连接词使表达连贯。

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by playing online typing games to practice speed and accuracy. I also type my notes and chat with friends instead of handwriting to get more real-life practice.

Ngữ pháp

13:Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I prefer typing because typing is more quickly and convenient and I usually chat with my friend use typing.

I prefer typing because typing is quicker and more convenient, and I usually chat with my friend using typing.

句中“more quickly”用作形容词修饰“typing”不正确,应该用形容词“quicker”。此外并列结构“quicker and more convenient”需并列形容词,且“use typing”在此处应为动名词短语“using typing”或更自然的“using it”。建议将副词改为形容词,并使用动名词或代词使表达更自然。

27:Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes I do, I type on my desktop every day because I need to finish my homework and sometimes I need have some online class and in my in my spare time I already chatting in the online with my friend.

Yes, I do. I type on my desktop every day because I need to finish my homework, and sometimes I have online classes. In my spare time I chat online with my friends.

句中多处主谓及时态错误:1) “I need have”缺少助动词或应改为“I have”;2) “some online class”数量不一致应为复数“online classes”;3) “I already chatting”应为动词一般现在时“I chat”或现在进行时“I am chatting”,但语境为习惯动作,应使用一般现在时。还需在句子间加标点分割以清晰表达。建议注意主语和动词的一致性及正确使用时态。

6:Present tense issue

× On my grade 7 I can type on a keyboard because in the middle school I need study at the computer such as finish homework or having class. So the typing is a very practical skills and I.

In grade 7 I learned to type on a keyboard because in middle school I needed to use the computer to finish homework or attend classes. So typing is a very practical skill for me.

原句时态混乱:描述过去的学习经历应使用过去时,如“learned/needed”。“can type”不合时宜,应改为“learned to type”或“could type”。短语“need study at the computer”缺不定式或介词,应为“needed to use the computer”或“needed to study on the computer”。“a very practical skills”主谓/单复数不一致,应为“a very practical skill”或“very practical skills”。句子末尾不完整,应补全或合并为完整句子。建议根据时间点使用相应时态并确保主谓一致。

8:Verb + -ing form

× 1st, I usually play some typing games. Second, I replace the handwriting and speaking in the typing way, such as chatting with my friend or finish some homework.

First, I usually play some typing games. Second, I replace handwriting and speaking with typing, such as chatting with my friends or finishing some homework.

“replace ... in the typing way”表达不自然,应使用“replace ... with typing”。此外并列动词短语应保持形式一致:“chatting”与“finish”需统一为动名词形式,因此将“finish”改为“finishing”。“handwriting and speaking”前不加冠词更自然。建议使用“replace A with B”结构并保持并列成分的形式一致。

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