Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Actually I don't like typing or handwriting at all because I think typing is very boring and handwriting is boring too. I don't have any idea for typing or write handwriting. Yes, it's my opinion.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do type on a desktop or laptop keyboard keyboard every day. Oh actually it's on work day because my work need to type on their laptop or the desktop.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I start to learn how to type on a table when I was 6th grade because my aunt asked me to learn it and I think it's very important and necessary in my future worker.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I improve my typing by a practice every day. Yes, I at first I need to type every day to practice my typing speed and now I typing every day to keep my speed and my skills.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接给出立场,然后用一到两句具体理由支持,避免重复和模糊表达。注意时态和语法(如“I don't have any idea”应更明确),句子不要超过五句。可以用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I make mistakes I can correct them quickly on a computer, and typed documents are easier to share with others.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答(Yes/No + 简短说明),然后给一两个具体细节说明频率和场合。避免重复词汇(例如“keyboard keyboard”),并注意主谓一致与表达自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I type on a laptop almost every workday because my job requires writing emails and reports. I usually spend about four to six hours a day typing during office hours.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 用正确的时态和更清晰的短语描述时间(例如“when I was in sixth grade”),并给出原因时用更自然的表达。避免拼写和搭配错误(如“future worker”应为“future work”或“future career”)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in sixth grade because my aunt encouraged me to practice. I thought it would be useful for my future career, so I took it seriously and practiced regularly.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 先用一两句总结方法,再用具体细节说明练习频率和方式。注意语法(例如“by practicing every day”),避免冗余。可以提到具体工具或练习内容使答案更具体。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing every day using online typing tests and exercises. At first I focused on accuracy, and now I practice for 20 minutes daily to maintain my speed and reduce errors.
× Actually I don't like typing or handwriting at all because I think typing is very boring and handwriting is boring too.
✓ Actually I don't like typing or handwriting at all because I think typing is very boring and handwriting is boring too.
此句主要问题是重复表达“boring”,但这并非明确列出的语法错误(形容词用法本身正确)。可以保持不变或改为更自然的表达,例如使用副词或短语(如“both are boring”或“handwriting is boring as well”)。建议:简化重复,避免冗余。
× I don't have any idea for typing or write handwriting.
✓ I don't have any idea how to type or write by hand.
原句结构不正确:“have any idea for typing” 应为 “have any idea how to...”,且“write handwriting” 用法错误,应为 “write by hand”。建议:使用固定表达“have no idea how to + 动词原形”,并用“write by hand” 表示手写。
× Yes, it's my opinion.
✓ Yes, that's my opinion.
英语习惯用法中表示“那是我的观点”通常用“that's my opinion”而不是“it's my opinion”,后者虽能被理解但不自然。建议:使用固定搭配“that's my opinion”。
× Yes, I do type on a desktop or laptop keyboard keyboard every day.
✓ Yes, I do type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day.
句中重复了“keyboard”。这不是主谓不一致,但属于句子冗余与结构错误。删除多余词使句子正确自然。建议:检查重复单词。
× Oh actually it's on work day because my work need to type on their laptop or the desktop.
✓ Oh actually it's on work days because my work requires me to type on their laptop or desktop.
错误点:1) “on work day” 应为复数或常规短语“on work days”;2) 主谓一致:主语“my work”是第三人称单数,应使用“requires”;3) 代词与人称不匹配:应明确是“requires me to type”;4) “the desktop” 不需要定冠词。建议:注意主谓一致,使用复数频率短语,明确动作的承受者。
× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? / I start to learn how to type on a table when I was 6th grade because my aunt asked me to learn it and I think it's very important and necessary in my future worker.
✓ I started to learn how to type on a keyboard when I was in 6th grade because my aunt asked me to learn it, and I think it's very important and necessary for my future work.
错误点:1) 时态错误:问题用过去时,回答应使用一般过去时“started”;2) “start to learn” 在过去应为“started to learn”或“started learning”;3) “on a table” 不合适,应该是 “on a keyboard” 或 “at a table” (意指在键盘上学打字);4) “6th grade” 前需要介词“in”;5) “future worker” 用词错误,应为“future work” 或“future career”。建议:根据提问使用过去时,注意介词搭配和名词选择。
× I improve my typing by a practice every day.
✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day.
错误点:固定结构应为“by + 动名词(-ing)”,不是“by a practice”。因此应使用“by practicing every day”。建议:记住“by + -ing” 表示通过做某事来改进。
× Yes, I at first I need to type every day to practice my typing speed and now I typing every day to keep my speed and my skills.
✓ At first I needed to type every day to practice my typing speed, and now I type every day to maintain my speed and skills.
错误点:1) 冗余“Yes, I at first I” 结构重复,需简化;2) 时态不一致:描述过去应使用过去式“needed”;3) “I typing” 需用动词形式“I type”;4) “keep my speed and my skills” 更自然为“maintain my speed and skills”。建议:保持时态一致,移除多余词,主语后使用正确动词形式。