Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer to handwriting because they can make me uh, uh, remember some details more clear clearly.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
MMM, I usually type on the laptop, uh, every day because it's convenient and I can take it everywhere.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Umm, I remembered in my middle school, I started to, uh, learn the typing and there was, there were some computer class and teachers, uh, teach us to use the computer and typing.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
MMM, I usually practice on the computer classes and umm, later I had I, I owned my old computer and usually I practice at home, which, uh, improve my typing skills.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 注意语法和表达的自然性;避免重复填充词(如 uh, um);主句要用正确的结构和单数/复数形式,并提供清晰理由与具体例子。可以把回答控制在最多5句内,首句直接回答问题,随后用连接词补充细节。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember details more clearly. For example, when I take notes by hand during lectures, I tend to recall key points better later. Also, writing forces me to summarize information, which reinforces my memory.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 减少填充词並更自然地表述;用更准确的词汇(e.g. portable rather than 'take it everywhere')并可补充一两句具体场景说明。保持结构清晰,首句直接回答,然后用连接词扩展。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop every day because it's portable and convenient. For instance, I often work on my laptop in cafés or at the library, which makes it easy to study wherever I go.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 避免混乱时态和冗余表达;用简洁句子说明时间并补充具体细节(如年龄或年级),并用连词使句子连贯。删除多余重复和填充词。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in middle school, around the age of 12. Our computer classes taught basic typing skills, and the teacher gave us exercises to practice speed and accuracy.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 去掉口头填充词並修正语法(主谓一致、时态);用有条理的两三句描述具体方法(比如练习软件、每天练习时间、打字测试),并使用连接词增强逻辑。
Ví dụ: I improved my typing by practicing regularly in computer classes and at home on my personal computer. I also used online typing programs to increase my speed and accuracy, practicing for about 20 minutes every day.
× I prefer to handwriting because they can make me uh, uh, remember some details more clear clearly.
✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember some details more clearly.
问题类型:动词形式/用词错误(接近列表中的“8: Verb + -ing form”与“13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs”)。原句中不应使用不定式 short 'to handwriting',应使用动名词或名词 'handwriting' 表示偏好;代词“they”与先行词不一致,且动词短语“make me remember ... more clear”中 "more clear" 应为副词性短语 "more clearly"。改正建议:使用 'prefer + noun/gerund' 结构(如 'prefer handwriting' 或 'prefer to write by hand');将代词改为与先行词一致(it 或 this);将形容词改为副词修饰动词(clearly)。
× MMM, I usually type on the laptop, uh, every day because it's convenient and I can take it everywhere.
✓ I usually type on my laptop every day because it's convenient and I can take it everywhere.
问题类型:冠词/代词使用不当(匹配列表中“22: Article errors”和“12: Incorrect use of pronouns”)。原句中的 'the laptop' 听起来像特指一台公共电脑,表达更自然应用所有格 'my laptop' 表示说话者自己的电脑;去掉多余逗号和填充语能使句子更流畅。改正建议:使用所有格来表示归属(my laptop);保持句子简洁。
× Umm, I remembered in my middle school, I started to, uh, learn the typing and there was, there were some computer class and teachers, uh, teach us to use the computer and typing.
✓ I remember in middle school I started to learn typing, and there were some computer classes where teachers taught us to use computers and type.
问题类型:时态与主谓一致(对应列表中的“5: Past tense issue”和“27: Subject-verb agreement errors”)。原句使用 'I remembered' 与描述过去经历更常用 'I remember'(如果回忆的内容现在仍记得);若要使用过去时,应为 'I remembered that...'。此外,'some computer class' 应为复数 'classes';'teachers teach us' 在叙述过去事件时应使用过去式 'taught'。改正建议:根据说话者想表达的是现在仍记得(使用 present)或纯过去经历(使用 past),并保证名词复数及动词时态一致。
× MMM, I usually practice on the computer classes and umm, later I had I, I owned my old computer and usually I practice at home, which, uh, improve my typing skills.
✓ I usually practiced in computer classes, and later I got my own old computer and practiced at home, which improved my typing skills.
问题类型:动词时态与形式、冠词使用(对应“5: Past tense issue”、“22: Article errors”与“8: Verb + -ing form”)。原句混用现在时与过去时('usually practice' 与 'later I had'),如果描述过去的学习过程应把动词统一为过去时;'on the computer classes' 介词不当,应为 'in computer classes';'I had I, I owned' 冗余且不通顺;'which improve' 应为过去式 'which improved' 与前文时态一致。改正建议:明确时态(过去学习经历用过去式),使用正确介词 'in' 与合适的名词短语 'my own computer',删除多余重复语。