Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing because I like the clicking sounds and also typing is very convenient, right? And you can, if you want to, uh, remember something and just, uh, take out your phone and type in something on the phone notes.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Uh, actually no, because I'm not very good at typing, so I want a type on desktops or laptops every day. Umm, instead of, uh, those types I prefer to uh, type on my phones. It is more faster to me.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Maybe when I was in primary school my teacher taught me how to typing on laptops. Uh, at the computer class maybe around age 6. Umm, learning how to typing.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Uh, I just use some typing apps like uh, it is very famous in Chinese and like umm, many pupils will use this apps to learn how to type well.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答較自然,但有多處口頭禪(uh, right)與重複表述,且句子較長、不夠有條理。建議:1) 去掉不必要的填充詞(如 uh, right),2) 開頭先一句直接表明立場,接着用一到兩個簡潔且具體的理由支持,每個理由用連接詞(for example, because)串接,3) 控制在不超過五句。具體練習:預先列出兩個清晰原因並用簡短例子說明。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and faster than handwriting. For example, I can quickly open my phone and jot down ideas in the notes app. Also, typing makes it easy to edit and organize my work.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答有多處語法錯誤和填充詞,表達不夠清晰且存在自相矛盾(先說 no,接着又說想每天在桌上/筆電打字)。建議:1) 先直接回覆 yes/no,然後用一兩句解釋;2) 修正語法錯誤(例如 “I want to type” 或 “I prefer typing on my phone”);3) 用連接詞(because, so)使句子連貫。多練習把想法先在腦中組織成兩句話再說。
Ví dụ: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I'm not confident at typing on them. Instead, I prefer typing on my phone since it's faster and more convenient for me.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答有基本內容,但有語法錯誤(how to typing → how to type)和冗長重複。建議:1) 清楚給出時態和年齡(e.g. when I was six),2) 用一個整潔的句子說明發生時間,若需補充可加一句描述課堂內容,3) 去掉填充詞並注意動詞不定式形式。
Ví dụ: I learned how to type when I was about six years old in primary school. My teacher showed us basic typing skills during computer class, which helped me get started.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答內容具體但表達模糊、有語法和數量一致問題(this apps → these apps),並含填充詞。建議:1) 明確說出使用的具體方法或應用名稱(如果不能說名稱,也說明功能,如 'touch-typing app'),2) 用正確單複數和簡潔句子,3) 可補充頻率或效果以增加細節。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by using popular typing apps that teach touch-typing and give practice exercises. I use them regularly, about 20 minutes a day, which has helped me increase my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer typing because I like the clicking sounds and also typing is very convenient, right? And you can, if you want to, uh, remember something and just, uh, take out your phone and type in something on the phone notes.
✓ I prefer typing because I like the clicking sounds, and typing is very convenient. If you want to remember something, you can take out your phone and type it into your phone's notes.
问题类型对应:11(介词/短语使用)和22(冠词/文章错误)及26(句子结构)。句子中“and also typing is very convenient, right?” 口语化冗余且标点需分句;“type in something on the phone notes” 中介词搭配不当,应为“type it into your phone's notes” 或“type something in your phone notes”。此外省略代词“it”会使句子不完整。建议把句子拆成两句,使用正确的介词搭配并补全代词。
× Uh, actually no, because I'm not very good at typing, so I want a type on desktops or laptops every day.
✓ Actually no, because I'm not very good at typing, so I don't want to type on desktops or laptops every day.
问题类型对应:2(第三人称)和22(冠词/文章错误)及27(主谓一致/句子结构)。原句中出现多余的“a”导致不正确(“a type” 不成立),且语意应为不想每天在台式或笔记本上打字,需用否定形式“don't want to type”。建议去掉多余冠词并调整为否定不定式结构。
× Umm, instead of, uh, those types I prefer to uh, type on my phones. It is more faster to me.
✓ Instead of those, I prefer to type on my phone. It is faster for me.
问题类型对应:12(代词使用)和13(形容词/副词使用)。“those types” 不明确且冗余,应省为“those”或更具体的名词;“phones” 应为单数“phone” 更自然;比较级错误“more faster” 是重复比较,应用“faster”;短语“to me” 在此情境更合适为“for me”。建议去掉多余词,使用正确比较级与介词短语。
× Maybe when I was in primary school my teacher taught me how to typing on laptops.
✓ Maybe when I was in primary school my teacher taught me how to type on laptops.
问题类型对应:8(动词 + -ing 形式)。在“teach someone how to do something” 结构中,动词应使用不定式“to type” 而不是动名词“typing”。建议记住“teach someone how to + 动词原形”的固定搭配。
× Uh, at the computer class maybe around age 6. Umm, learning how to typing.
✓ I learned this in computer class, maybe around age six, when I was learning how to type.
问题类型对应:26(句子结构错误)和11(介词使用)。原句断裂且缺主语谓语,“at the computer class” 应为“in computer class”;“around age 6” 更自然为“around age six”;“learning how to typing” 应改为“learning how to type”。建议合并为完整句子,并修正介词和动词形式。
× Uh, I just use some typing apps like uh, it is very famous in Chinese and like umm, many pupils will use this apps to learn how to type well.
✓ I just use some typing apps that are very famous in China, and many pupils use these apps to learn to type well.
问题类型对应:1(单复数问题)、11(介词/短语)和27(主谓一致)。“this apps” 数量与指示词不一致,应为“these apps”;“it is very famous in Chinese” 语法和表达都不自然,应该说“that are very famous in China”;“many pupils will use” 表示将来时不合语境,改为一般现在时“many pupils use”。同时“learn how to type well” 简化为“learn to type well”。建议统一复数指示词,修正介词短语并使用恰当时态。