Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

So interesting question and I think that I prefer typing than handwriting. Why? Because it is very and more convenient than handwriting and it can provide a lot of opportunity for my work. For instance, smartphones in my country can offer program which calls TT.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

So actually I can say I don't because for me keyboard or desktop is not useful thing for my personality and I just prefer to to write on my iPod or my smartphones.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

So it was a very interesting question and I think that's my first experience about keyboard was when I was six or seven years old. And I remember that I was in elementary school and my teacher from AI taught me how how can I typing?

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

So I have several ways how I can produce and improve my typing. One of the most crucial and popular is just practice. For instance, umm in my my computer have has program which can provide a lot of information how you can improve your keyboard skills.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Старайтесь формулировать ответы грамотно и естественно: используйте правильные предлоги и сравнения (prefer X to Y), избегайте лишних вводных фраз («So interesting question»). Давайте более точные и связанные детали: объясните, почему это удобнее (скорость, редактирование, поиск), и приведите конкретный пример программы правильно (название и её функция). Уменьшите повторы и говорите не более 3–4 предложений.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, on my smartphone I use a note app that automatically syncs with my computer, so I can find and organize my work quickly.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 54.0

Gợi ý: Говорите более прямо и используйте правильную грамматику: избегайте лишних вводных («So actually I can say») и дублирования слов («to to»). Используйте слова в правильной форме (useful thing → useful for me). Дайте короткое объяснение и пример привычки, используйте связку (because, so) для логики.

Ví dụ: Not every day. I rarely use a desktop or laptop keyboard because I find mobile devices more convenient. For example, I usually type notes and messages on my smartphone since it is always with me.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Избегайте вводных фраз и говорите чётко по теме: укажите время и место (When/how). Используйте правильные конструкции времени (I first learned to type when I was six or seven) и корректную формулировку для описания учителя. Уберите повторы («how how») и неверные вопросы внутри ответа.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about six or seven in elementary school. My teacher showed us basic finger positions and simple exercises, which helped me build a good foundation.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: Говорите конкретно и избегайте ненужных слова («So», «umm», повторы). Назовите конкретные методы (регулярная практика, онлайн-курсы, тренажёры), используйте связки (for example, in addition) и корректную грамматику (my computer has a program). Приведите пример названия программы или упражнения.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mostly by regular practice and using typing tutor software. For example, I use an online program that gives daily exercises and shows my speed and accuracy so I can track progress.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer typing than handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting.

Используется неправильный предлог; глагол 'prefer' требует предлога 'to' при сравнении двух вариантов. Совет: используйте 'prefer A to B' или 'would rather A than B'.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Because it is very and more convenient than handwriting and it can provide a lot of opportunity for my work.

✓ Because it is much more convenient than handwriting and it can provide many opportunities for my work.

Неправильное использование слов 'very and more' и неисчисляемое/исчисляемое существительное. Следует использовать 'much more' вместо 'very and more', 'opportunity' во множественном числе как 'opportunities' или 'a lot of opportunities'.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× For instance, smartphones in my country can offer program which calls TT.

✓ For instance, smartphones in my country can offer a program called TT.

Неправильное использование глагольной формы и артикля: требуется 'a program' и причастие 'called' в пассивном значении. Совет: используйте 'called' для названий и добавляйте неопределённый артикль при упоминании одного из программ.

Sentence structure errors

× So actually I can say I don't because for me keyboard or desktop is not useful thing for my personality and I just prefer to to write on my iPod or my smartphones.

✓ So actually I can say I don't, because for me a keyboard or desktop is not useful, and I just prefer to write on my iPod or my smartphone.

Несколько ошибок структуры: лишний 'to' (повтор), отсутствие артикля 'a' перед 'keyboard', слово 'useful thing' громоздко — лучше 'not useful'. 'smartphones' во множественном числе не соответствует 'my' устройству; лучше 'my smartphone'.

Past tense issue

× So it was a very interesting question and I think that's my first experience about keyboard was when I was six or seven years old.

✓ So it was a very interesting question, and I think my first experience with a keyboard was when I was six or seven years old.

Неудачная конструкция 'that's my first experience about keyboard was' — проблема порядка слов и предлога. Используйте 'experience with a keyboard' и простую прошедшую форму 'was' в правильном порядке.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× And I remember that I was in elementary school and my teacher from AI taught me how how can I typing?

✓ And I remember that I was in elementary school and my AI teacher taught me how I could type.

Неправильный порядок слов в вопросительной форме внутри косвенной речи и неверная форма глагола 'typing'. В косвенных предложениях используется порядковая форма 'how I could type' или 'how to type'.

Sentence structure errors

× So I have several ways how I can produce and improve my typing.

✓ So I have several ways to improve my typing.

Ненужная конструкция 'ways how I can produce and' — громоздкая и неверная. Используйте 'ways to improve' или 'ways in which I can improve'.

Article errors

× One of the most crucial and popular is just practice.

✓ One of the most crucial and popular methods is simply practice.

Отсутствует существительное после 'One of the most crucial and popular'; нужно указать 'methods' или 'ways'. 'just' лучше заменить на 'simply' для стиля.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× For instance, umm in my my computer have has program which can provide a lot of information how you can improve your keyboard skills.

✓ For instance, my computer has a program that can provide a lot of information on how you can improve your keyboard skills.

Ошибка порядка слов и формы глагола: 'my computer has' вместо 'my my computer have has'. Нужен артикль 'a program' и относительное местоимение 'that'. Предлог 'on' необходим в выражении 'information on how to...'.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Interesting— Absorbing
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Useful— Functional; Beneficial
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