Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không chính xác (ví dụ “him writing”, “pain”); giảm tiếng “uh” và lặp từ; tổ chức câu rõ ràng với một câu chủ đề và 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ đúng (handwriting, feel the paper); (2) Dùng liên từ để kết nối ý (because, so); (3) Giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu và tránh từ ngập tiếng.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can visualize the layout and recall ideas more easily. Also, I enjoy the tactile feel of the paper, which makes studying more relaxing.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Sửa lỗi chính tả/viết hoa không cần thiết (Lesson plan → lesson plans) và dùng cấu trúc mạch lạc hơn; tránh lặp ý (every day). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ phần mềm bạn dùng) và nối các câu bằng liên từ để tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I use it for work. As a teacher I prepare lesson plans and edit my lecture slides on a laptop, usually using Word and PowerPoint.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Giảm tiếng ngập (umm, uh) và gộp thông tin để câu rõ ràng hơn; dùng cấu trúc thời gian chính xác (in grade 3, at primary school). Thêm một chi tiết nhỏ để cụ thể hóa (ví dụ kỹ năng nào học được).

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in grade 3 at primary school. In our IT class the teacher showed us proper finger placement and basic typing exercises, which helped me build speed early on.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Tránh lặp và dùng ngữ pháp chính xác (spend 15 minutes improving, typing skills, website name format). Kết hợp thông tin thành 2–3 câu, nêu rõ cách tập (bài tập, mục tiêu tốc độ) và lợi ích cụ thể.

Ví dụ: I spend at least 15 minutes every day improving my typing by practicing online. I use abctyping.com for structured exercises and speed tests, which has helped me increase accuracy and words-per-minute over time.

× I prefer him writing because handwriting helps me learn uh better and I also love the feeling when when I touch the pain in the paper, it makes me more relaxed and happy.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps me learn better and I also love the feeling when I touch the pen on the paper; it makes me more relaxed and happy.

Use 'prefer' followed by a noun or gerund without an object like 'him'. Replace 'him writing' with 'handwriting' to convey the activity. Remove filler words 'uh'. 'Pain' is a typo for 'pen'. Use 'pen on the paper' or 'pen to the paper' and join clauses for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes I do, I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I need to do this for work. I'm a teacher so I write Lesson plan and repair my lectures on laptops every day.

✓ Yes, I do. I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I need to for work. I'm a teacher, so I write lesson plans and prepare my lectures on my laptop every day.

Use plural 'lesson plans' for general activities (singular/plural). 'Repair my lectures' is incorrect word choice; use 'prepare' or 'revise'. Ensure consistent singular/plural and possessive: 'my laptop'. Capitalization of 'Lesson plan' is unnecessary. Grammar problem type ID:2

× Umm, I learned to type on a keyboard when I was a primary student. Uh, as I remember when I was in grade 3, uh, in IT class, my teachers taught me how to use keyboard.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was a primary school student. I remember that when I was in grade 3 in IT class, my teachers taught me how to use the keyboard.

Use 'primary school student' for natural phrasing. Add article 'the' before 'keyboard'. Use past simple consistently ('learned', 'taught'). Remove filler words 'uh' and 'umm' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Each day I spend at least 15 minutes to improve my typing. It is a very useful website to practice my typing skill. It is abctyping.com. It's very useful for everyone to who's going to learn typing.

✓ Each day I spend at least 15 minutes improving my typing. There is a very useful website to practice typing called abctyping.com. It's very useful for anyone who wants to learn typing.

After 'spend' use verb+ing ('spend... improving'). Use 'There is' to introduce the website and 'called' to name it. 'Everyone to who's going to learn' is awkward; use 'anyone who wants to learn'. 'Typing skill' is better as 'typing' or 'typing skills'. Grammar problem type ID:6