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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

I prefer taping because I get used to typing every day. It is much faster and convenience for setting message.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

I usually tap on a lot of cable every day because it's portable and more convenient for my work and my life.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

On a keyboard. I have learned to type on a keyboard when I was a child or at Junior School.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

I usually practice typing every day by sending message and writing tests in order to improving my typing.

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Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 用词和句子结构需要更准确和自然。注意拼写(typing, not taping),时态和语法(convenient而不是 convenience),并保持简洁。可以先给出直接回答的主题句,然后用一两句提供具体原因,使用连接词如 because 或 as a result。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because I use a computer every day. It is much faster than handwriting and more convenient for composing and sending messages.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 句子含义不清且有大量错误(tap → type,a lot of cable → unclear). 明确回答是desktop或laptop,然后给出1–2个具体原因,使用连接词如 because 或 so。避免模糊表达,如 'my work and my life' 可以改为具体场景。

Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable. I can work from different places and carry it easily between home and the office.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然,注意时态一致(use past simple: I learned)。去掉多余的短语('On a keyboard'重复且不需要)。可以给出具体年龄或年级,并使用连接词如 when to link time information.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was a child, around primary school. I started practicing proper typing techniques in about third or fourth grade.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 语法和用词需要改进(messages,writing tests → writing texts?,in order to → to, improving → improve)。給出具体练习方法和频率,并用连接词如 by 或 through 来描述方式。

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing every day. For example, I send messages, do online typing exercises, and set aside 15 minutes to practice accuracy and speed.

Ngữ pháp

22:Article errors

× I prefer taping because I get used to typing every day.

I prefer typing because I am used to typing every day.

原句中有两个问题:一是“taping”拼写应为“typing”,属于词形错误(但在提供的类型表中对应“动词形式”相关项,主要按上下文修正为正确词);二是短语“get used to”在这里表达习惯性应使用被动形式“be used to”或主动完成结构“I got used to”来表示现在的习惯。建议使用“I am used to typing every day.” 表示“我习惯每天打字”。注意中文:使用现在时态和被动形态更自然。

13:Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It is much faster and convenience for setting message.

It is much faster and more convenient for composing messages.

原句中“convenience”是名词,需用形容词“convenient”来修饰;“setting message”搭配不当,常用动词“compose”,“write”或短语“sending messages”。此外名词复数更自然应为“messages”。建议用“more convenient”与“faster”并列,并把动词和名词改为常用搭配。

8:Verb + -ing form

× I usually tap on a lot of cable every day because it's portable and more convenient for my work and my life.

I usually type on a laptop every day because it's portable and more convenient for my work and life.

原句中“tap on a lot of cable”不合逻辑且搭配错误。根据上下文应为“type on a laptop/keyboard”。同时“my life”前的冠词可省,常用表达是“for my work and life”或更自然“for work and daily life”。建议使用“type on a laptop”。

6:Present tense issue

× On a keyboard. I have learned to type on a keyboard when I was a child or at Junior School.

I learned to type on a keyboard when I was a child or in junior school.

原句时态混用问题:使用现在完成时“I have learned”与过去时间状语“when I was a child”冲突,应改为一般过去时“learned”。此外“at Junior School”中首字母不必大写且介词更常用“in junior school”。建议整体用过去时表达过去发生的动作。

20:Incorrect adverb placement

× I usually practice typing every day by sending message and writing tests in order to improving my typing.

I usually practice typing every day by sending messages and writing tests in order to improve my typing.

原句问题有:1) “sending message”中的“message”应为复数“messages”;2) “in order to improving”中动词应用不带-ing的不定式“to improve”,因为“in order to”后接动词原形。此外“practice typing every day by ...”结构中动作顺序和副词位置可保留。建议改为“by sending messages and writing tests in order to improve my typing”。

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