Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

Well, it depends on different situation. When I'm writing my diary I definitely choose handwriting because it carries more emotional attachment. But when I'm working I typing is much more efficient.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

No, I only tap on a desktop or laptop keyboard when it comes to work related emails. Otherwise I prefer using phone keyboard because it is more handy and portable for me.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

I learned a skill when I was about 10. It was my first time using a computer. In the first I typed very slowly. But practice makes perfect right? So I so my speed of typing get got faster and faster.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

As I mentioned before, I did a lot of typing exercises to improve the my typing skills and speed. Furthermore, me and my friend we also had a small typing competition to work on the skills together.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 74.0

Gợi ý: 简洁有序地直接回应问题,并修正语法与用词错误。回答应包含主题句,然后用1–2个句子用连词展开支持细节,避免重复。注意动词形式(如“typing”前加助动词)和单复数/冠词使用。可增加具体例子(如写日记、写报告)以增强内容。

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. For personal things like my diary, I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me reflect; however, for work tasks such as reports or emails, I prefer typing because it is much faster and easier to edit.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答要直接并自然,用更准确的动词和连词使句子连贯。避免口语化的“tap”用于桌面/笔记本,改用“use”。补充具体频率或场景(如每天早上或在通勤时)能提高内容分数。

Ví dụ: Not every day. I usually use a desktop or laptop keyboard for work-related emails, but for quick messages and notes I use my phone keyboard because it’s more convenient when I’m commuting.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 注意句子结构和时态一致,避免口语填充词与语法错误。先给出简洁的时间点,然后用1–2句具体细节说明学习过程并用合适的连接词(e.g. Initially, then, eventually)。避免问句形式的填充词。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about ten, which was the first time I used a computer. Initially I typed very slowly, but after regular practice and exercises I gradually increased my speed and accuracy.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 保持条理清晰,避免重复和语法错误(如不必要的代词和冠词)。用连接词(e.g. In addition, I also…)并给出具体方法(例如每天练习多少分钟、使用哪些网站或软件)会更有说服力。

Ví dụ: As I mentioned, I practiced regularly using online typing programs for about 20 minutes a day. In addition, my friend and I held small typing competitions to make practice more fun and push each other to improve.

Ngữ pháp

6: Present tense issue

× When I'm writing my diary I definitely choose handwriting because it carries more emotional attachment.

✓ When I write in my diary I definitely choose handwriting because it carries more emotional attachment.

原句中的 "When I'm writing my diary" 用現在進行時不符合一般性習慣性行為的描述。此處表示一種常態或習慣,應使用一般現在時 "When I write"。建議在描述經常發生或習慣性的行為時使用一般現在時。

2: Third person singular issue

× But when I'm working I typing is much more efficient.

✓ But when I'm working typing is much more efficient.

原句中 "I typing" 主語為第一人稱單數,動詞應為動名詞或不帶主語的動名詞片語。這裡應刪掉多餘的主語 "I",保留動名詞 "typing",或改為完整句子如 "But when I'm working, I find typing much more efficient."。建議注意主語與動詞形式配合,避免錯誤插入重複主語。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× No, I only tap on a desktop or laptop keyboard when it comes to work related emails.

✓ No, I only tap on a desktop or laptop keyboard for work-related emails.

原句中 "when it comes to work related emails" 用法冗長且介詞搭配不自然。更地道的表達是用介詞 "for" 表示用途:"for work-related emails"。另外 "work-related" 應加連字符。建議使用簡潔的介詞短語表明用途。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Otherwise I prefer using phone keyboard because it is more handy and portable for me.

✓ Otherwise I prefer using my phone's keyboard because it is handier and more portable for me.

原句中缺少所有格 "my" 或所有格結構來表明鍵盤屬於手機,應為 "my phone's keyboard" 或 "the phone keyboard"。此外形容詞比較級應為 "handier" 而非副詞 "more handy",並建議在兩個比較級形容詞前加連詞 "and"。建議注意所有格和形容詞比較級的使用。

5: Past tense issue

× I learned a skill when I was about 10.

✓ I learned the skill when I was about ten.

原句中用詞不夠自然,"a skill" 太籠統,且數字寫法建議一致。若指特定技能(打字),應用定冠詞 "the skill" 或明確說出是 "typing"。建議在談及過去學到的特定技能時使用定冠詞或直接命名該技能。

26: Sentence structure errors

× It was my first time using a computer.

✓ It was my first time using a computer.

該句語法正確,屬於完整句子且時態一致,無需修改。保留原句。

20: Incorrect adverb placement

× In the first I typed very slowly.

✓ At first I typed very slowly.

原句中的 "In the first" 用法不正確,表示最初時應使用短語 "At first"。此外 "typed very slowly" 時態正確,僅需修正開頭的時間狀語。建議使用常見的時間副詞短語來表達 "最初"。

26: Sentence structure errors

× But practice makes perfect right?

✓ But practice makes perfect, right?

原句缺少逗號導致語氣連貫性差。語法本身正確,但標點應修正以符合書寫習慣。建議在附加問句前加逗號以清晰表達語氣。

5: Past tense issue

× So I so my speed of typing get got faster and faster.

✓ So my typing speed got faster and faster.

原句有多處冗餘與時態錯誤。重複的 "so" 多餘;"get got" 組合錯誤,應使用過去時 "got" 或過去完成/過去進行視上下文。簡潔正確的表達為 "my typing speed got faster and faster"。建議刪除多餘詞並使用單一正確的過去時動詞。

6: Present tense issue

× As I mentioned before, I did a lot of typing exercises to improve the my typing skills and speed.

✓ As I mentioned before, I did a lot of typing exercises to improve my typing skills and speed.

原句中多了一個定冠詞 "the" 在 "the my typing skills" 前,語法混亂。應刪除多餘的 "the" 並使用 "my typing skills"。此外使用過去時 "did" 與上下文一致。建議注意冠詞與所有格不應同時並列使用。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Furthermore, me and my friend we also had a small typing competition to work on the skills together.

✓ Furthermore, my friend and I also had a small typing competition to work on our skills together.

原句中主格代詞使用錯誤,"me and my friend" 應為主語時用 "my friend and I",並且句中出現了重複主語 "we"。另外 "the skills" 不如 "our skills" 自然,應使用所有格以表明技能屬於雙方。建議使用正確主格代詞排序(他人優先)並避免主語重複。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Different— Dissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
Perfect— Ideal; Flawless; Exact; Absolute; Improve
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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