Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often ride a bicycle?

Thí sinh

I don't ride a bicycle very often just about once a week. I usually go cycling with my daughter at weekends to get some exercise.

Giám khảo

What transport do you often use when travelling?

Thí sinh

I usually drive when I travel because I can decide when to live and visit places further away.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

Thí sinh

Yes I do I prefer to sit by the window because I can enjoy the scenery and switch off for a wire

Giám khảo

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did. I went to Beijing with my family when I was a child with Si Tianman and visited the forbidden city.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you often ride a bicycle?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接、信息完整,并给出了频率、同伴和原因。建议在“very often”和“just”之间加逗号或停顿;“at weekends”可以使用,但“on weekends”更常见。还可以补充一个具体细节,例如骑车的地点或骑车后的感受,使答案更生动。

Ví dụ: I don’t ride a bicycle very often—probably only once a week. I usually go cycling with my daughter on weekends because it’s a pleasant way to get some exercise. We often ride along a riverside path near our home.

What transport do you often use when travelling?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 答案的基本结构清楚,也给出了原因,但“decide when to live”用词错误,应该是“decide when to leave”;“visit places further away”表达不够自然,可以改为“travel to places that are farther away”。建议再补充一个具体结果,例如开车更方便、节省等车时间。

Ví dụ: I usually drive when I travel because I can decide when to leave and visit places that are farther away. It’s also more convenient because I don’t have to wait for public transport or carry my luggage around.

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 观点和原因都很明确,但需要在“Yes, I do.”之后停顿或分句。句末“switch off for a wire”不符合英语表达;如果想说“放松、暂时不想工作”,可以说“switch off for a while”或“clear my mind”。建议使用逗号和连接词,并补充一个具体场景。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I prefer sitting by the window because I can enjoy the scenery and switch off for a while. On long train journeys, watching the countryside helps me relax and clear my mind.

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答了问题,并提供了旅行地点和活动,但“when I was a child with Si Tianman”结构不清晰;如果“Si Tianman”是时间表达,建议确认其准确含义并改用正确英文。如果想表达“坐了四天慢车”,可以说“we travelled by slow train for four days”。另外,“the Forbidden City”中的专有名词需要大写,建议补充旅程给你留下的印象。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I travelled to Beijing with my family by slow train, and the journey took about four days. We visited the Forbidden City, and I was fascinated by its huge courtyards and beautiful traditional buildings.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Yes I do I prefer to sit by the window because I can enjoy the scenery and switch off for a wire.

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer to sit by the window because I can enjoy the scenery and switch off for a while.

“Yes, I do”是对一般疑问句的完整回答,后面需要用句号与主句分开,不能直接连续连接两个独立句子。应改为“ Yes, I do. I prefer...”。另外,“for a wire”不是正确的固定表达;表示“暂时放松、不去想事情”时,应使用“for a while”。

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