Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先直接回答频率，再说明原因。注意搭配和语法：应说“at my university”而不是“on my school”；“ride my bicycle to class”比“use bicycles to go to class”更自然；“safe times”应改为“safe”，并删除“go to class”的重复。可以使用“because”和“also”连接细节，但答案最好控制在2—3句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I ride my bicycle quite often. I bought it because my university is very large, and cycling to class is both convenient and safe. It also helps me get around campus quickly.

Gợi ý: 开头应改为“I really like travelling by car”或“I often travel by car”。注意冠词和词性：“drive a car”，“relaxing”描述事物，而“relaxed”描述人的感受；“relaxable”在这里不自然。应说“stop anywhere”，并明确说明为什么省钱，例如不需要买火车票。避免重复“relaxed”，并用“Moreover”或“Besides”连接补充理由。

Ví dụ: I often travel by car because it is comfortable and relaxing. I can stop anywhere to enjoy the scenery, and I do not have to follow a fixed timetable. Besides, it can be cheaper than buying tickets for public transport, especially when I travel with my family.

Gợi ý: 应直接说“I definitely prefer a window seat”。“behind the windows”应改为“through the window”；不要重复“I can see”。列举景物时可以使用“such as”，并补充结果，例如“the journey feels more enjoyable”。句子目前缺少清晰结构，建议按照“观点+原因+具体例子+结果”组织。

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely prefer to sit by the window when travelling. I enjoy looking at the scenery through the window, such as trees, mountains and birds in the sky. It makes the journey more enjoyable and helps me relax.

Gợi ý: 这是过去经历，应统一使用过去时，例如“we went”或“I had”。地点名称需要说清楚；如果不确定英文名称，可以用“a beautiful town in China”代替。注意主谓一致：“the people were very friendly”；“I very like it”应改为“I really liked it”。建议先回答“是”，再介绍地点、景色、当地人和食物，并用“also”或“what’s more”连接。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a long journey with my family when I was a child. We went to a beautiful town in China, where we enjoyed the amazing scenery and delicious local food. The people were very friendly, so I really enjoyed the trip.

× I bought a bicycle on my school because my university is very big.

✓ I bought a bicycle for use at my university because my university is very big.

“on my school”中的介词使用不正确。表示在学校使用自行车时，应使用“at my university”；如果想表达“为了在学校使用”，可以说“for use at my university”。

× I often use bicycles to go to class go to class.

✓ I often use my bicycle to go to class.

“go to class”重复了一次，造成句子结构错误。删除重复部分即可。这里使用单数“my bicycle”也更自然，因为是在谈论自己的自行车。

× It's very safe times and also very convenient for me.

✓ It is very safe and also very convenient for me.

“safe times”不是正确的表达。“safe”和“convenient”都是形容词，可以并列作表语，因此应说“It is very safe and convenient”。

× I very like to use cars.

✓ I really like using a car.

“very”通常不能直接修饰动词“like”。修饰动词“like”时应使用“really”。另外，“like”后面可以接动名词“using”。

× I think driving car is very relaxed relaxed time for me.

✓ I think driving a car is a very relaxing experience for me.

可数名词“car”前需要冠词，所以应说“a car”。“relaxed”通常描述人的感受，而驾驶带来的体验应使用“relaxing”。名词“experience”前也需要冠词“a”。

× Also it is very relaxable.

✓ It is also very relaxing.

“relaxable”不适合用来描述驾驶带来的感受。“relaxing”表示“令人放松的”，而“relaxed”表示“感到放松的”。这里主语“it”指驾驶这件事，所以用“relaxing”。

× I can stop at anywhere I want to see the view.

✓ I can stop anywhere I want to see the view.

“anywhere”本身已经表示地点，不需要再加介词“at”。因此应说“stop anywhere”。

× Yes, of course, I very like to sit by a window.

✓ Yes, of course, I really like to sit by the window.

“very”不能直接修饰动词“like”，应改为“really”。谈论旅行时通常说“sit by the window”，表示坐在车或交通工具的窗边。

× I can see many beautiful views behind the windows.

✓ I can see many beautiful views through the window.

表示“透过窗户看见景色”时，应使用介词“through”，而不是“behind”。“behind the window”表示景物在窗户后面，意思不准确。

× Also So it can I can see such as many beautiful trees, mountains or birds flying in the sky make me the time.

✓ I can see beautiful trees, mountains, and birds flying in the sky, which makes the journey enjoyable.

原句中“I can”“such as”和“make me the time”的结构混乱，句子缺少清晰的主干。列举景物时直接使用“trees, mountains, and birds”，并用“which makes the journey enjoyable”表达“这使旅途变得愉快”。

× I very like to sit by a window.

✓ I really like sitting by the window.

“like”后面既可以接不定式，也可以接动名词。这里使用“sitting”可以更自然地表达平时喜欢坐在窗边。原句中的主要错误是“very like”，应改为“really like”。

× Yes, when I was a child I go to I have a long journey and go to the Yin.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I went on a long journey to Yin.

句子讲述童年时的经历，应使用一般过去时。“go”要改为“went”。“go to I have a long journey”结构错误，应改为“went on a long journey”。表示参加或进行一次旅程时，常用搭配“go on a journey”。

× It is a place very beautiful outchina.

✓ It is a very beautiful place in China.

英语中形容词通常放在名词前面，所以应说“a very beautiful place”，而不是“a place very beautiful”。表示地点在中国，应使用“in China”。

× The people there is very friendly.

✓ The people there are very friendly.

“people”是复数名词，因此谓语动词要用复数形式“are”，不能使用单数形式“is”。

× I very like it.

✓ I really like it.

“very”不能直接修饰动词“like”。修饰动词时应使用“really”，所以正确表达是“I really like it”。