Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clearer grammar and vocabulary. “What’s in the scenario” is unnatural; say “the scenery helps me relax.” Also, use “In addition” with a complete structure, such as “I can also take photos of the lights and landscapes.” Organize the response into a main reason and a supporting detail, and avoid joining too many ideas in one sentence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually prefer a window seat because the scenery helps me relax during a journey. I can also take photos of the lights and landscapes, which makes the trip more enjoyable and memorable.

Gợi ý: Use “a long journey” or “a long trip,” not “a long trouble,” and check the place name and pronunciation: “Jeju Island.” You should say “a famous restaurant” and “tried local dishes,” rather than “look her dishes.” Keep the tense consistent by using “made” and “had never tried.” Add a clear linking phrase, such as “The highlight was...” to explain why the journey was memorable.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a long trip to Jeju Island with my family when I was a child. We visited a famous restaurant and tried some local dishes that I had never tasted before. The food was the highlight of the journey, and it made the trip especially memorable.

× Yes, when I travel I prefer to sit by the window because what's in the scenario help me willax and forget my worries in addition taking a photo of lights and landscapes makes travel more enjoyable and memorable.

✓ Yes, when I travel, I prefer to sit by the window because the scenery helps me relax and forget my worries. In addition, taking photos of lights and landscapes makes travel more enjoyable and memorable.

The singular subject scenery requires the singular verb helps, not help. Also, the sentence needs clearer punctuation to separate the two ideas. The spelling of relax and the more natural word scenery have also been corrected for clarity.

× Yes, when I travel I prefer to sit by the window because what's in the scenario help me willax and forget my worries in addition taking a photo of lights and landscapes makes travel more enjoyable and memorable.

✓ Yes, when I travel, I prefer to sit by the window because the scenery helps me relax and forget my worries. In addition to taking photos of lights and landscapes, I find that travelling becomes more enjoyable and memorable.

The expression in addition must be followed by to when it introduces a gerund phrase: in addition to taking. The phrase should be separated from the main clause with a comma for better sentence structure.

× Yes, when I was a child I had a long trouble with my family to Jesu Island. We ate at famous restaurant and tried to look her dishes which makes the treble more enjoyable because I had never tried that before.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a long journey with my family to Jesu Island. We ate at a famous restaurant and tried some local dishes, which made the journey more enjoyable because I had never tried them before.

A singular countable noun such as restaurant requires an article. Because famous begins with a consonant sound, the correct phrase is a famous restaurant.

× Yes, when I was a child I had a long trouble with my family to Jesu Island. We ate at famous restaurant and tried to look her dishes which makes the treble more enjoyable because I had never tried that before.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a long journey with my family to Jesu Island. We ate at a famous restaurant and tried some local dishes, which made the journey more enjoyable because I had never tried them before.

The student is describing a completed journey in the past, so the verb must be in the past tense. Therefore, makes should be changed to made.

× Yes, when I was a child I had a long trouble with my family to Jesu Island. We ate at famous restaurant and tried to look her dishes which makes the treble more enjoyable because I had never tried that before.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a long journey with my family to Jesu Island. We ate at a famous restaurant and tried some local dishes, which made the journey more enjoyable because I had never tried them before.

The pronoun them correctly refers to the plural noun dishes. The singular pronoun that does not clearly agree with or refer to the plural dishes in this context.