Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了“不太喜欢靠窗座位”的意思，但没有直接使用清晰的主题句，而且“Now really”“move out to”和“go to the bathroom”之间的表达不自然。建议先明确回答“Not really”，然后用“because”说明靠窗座位不方便去洗手间。可以补充一个具体情境，但控制在2至3句话内，避免重复使用“really”。

Ví dụ: Not really. I prefer an aisle seat because it is easier to get up and go to the bathroom without disturbing the other passengers.

Gợi ý: 你回答了“Sure”，也提到了去新加坡，但后半部分句子结构混乱，导致意思不清。“took me to Singapore and see”应改为过去时“took me to Singapore and we saw”。建议按照“直接回答＋旅行地点和时间＋具体活动或感受”的结构组织内容，并使用“where”和“because”等连接词。注意避免不清楚的表达，如“the more how”“northn city”和“important by horizons”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was about ten, my family took a long trip to Singapore, where we visited several tourist attractions and enjoyed the beautiful views. I remember it clearly because it was my first overseas journey.

× Now really it can be really hard to move out to and go to the bathroom it's very inconvenient

✓ Actually, it can be really hard to get up and go to the bathroom, so it’s very inconvenient.

原句把两个完整分句直接连接在一起，缺少适当的连接词或标点，造成句子结构错误。可以使用“so”连接原因和结果，并将“move out to”改为更自然的“get up and go”。

× Sure, when I was a child, my family took me to Singapore and see a lot of fascinating views

✓ Sure, when I was a child, my family took me to Singapore, and I saw a lot of fascinating views.

句子描述的是童年时发生的过去经历，因此“see”应改为过去式“saw”。同时加入主语“I”，明确表示是“我”看到了许多景色。

× and so the more how the northn city like it is really important by horizons

✓ The northern cityscape was really impressive on the horizon.

原句中的“the more how”和“like it is”组合方式不正确，句子结构无法表达完整清晰的意思。可以重组为“The northern cityscape was really impressive”，使句子具有完整的主语和谓语。

× by horizons

✓ on the horizon

表示“在地平线上”时，英语中应使用介词“on”，而不是“by”。正确表达是“on the horizon”。