Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答切题，并给出了两个理由，内容比较充分。不过，句子过长，缺少清晰的标点和连接结构；“scenaries”应改为“scenery”或“beautiful views”，“if I sit another place”应改为“if I sit somewhere else”，“I feel more sick”更自然的表达是“I feel more prone to motion sickness”。建议先用主题句直接回答，再用“Firstly”和“Also”分别展开理由，控制在3—4句话内，避免重复使用“sit by the window”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely prefer to sit by the window when travelling. Firstly, I enjoy taking photos of beautiful views, such as mountains and fields, and a window seat makes that much easier. Also, I am less likely to suffer from motion sickness when I can look outside.

Gợi ý: 回答基本切题，也提供了旅行原因和交通方式，但时态、用词和逻辑表达需要改进。“I have a long journey”应改为过去时“I had a long journey”，“when I was a kid”后面应使用过去时；“took a plan”是错误搭配，应为“took a plane”。另外，一百公里通常不算特别长的飞机旅程，建议说明旅行持续了多久，并补充一个具体的童年感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was about eight, my family took a long journey to move to another city. We travelled by plane, and the trip lasted several hours because the new city was quite far away. I remember feeling excited because it was my first time flying.

× Yes I do I prefer to sit by the window when travelling

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer to sit by the window when travelling.

原句中“Yes, I do”和“I prefer...”是两个完整句子，但中间没有句号或其他连接方式，形成句子连接错误。应将它们分成两个句子。

× I like to take lots of pictures like mountains, fields and other beautiful scenaries.

✓ I like to take lots of pictures of mountains, fields and other beautiful scenery.

“Scenery”表示“风景”，通常是不可数名词，没有复数形式，因此不能使用“sceneries”。另外，“pictures of mountains”比“pictures like mountains”更准确地表示“山的照片”。

× On the other hand if I sit another place and I feel more sick and I feel uncomfortable.

✓ On the other hand, if I sit in another place, I feel more sick and I feel uncomfortable.

表示“坐在另一个地方”时，place前面需要使用介词“in”，所以应说“sit in another place”，不能说“sit another place”。

× I have a long journey with my family when I was a kid.

✓ I had a long journey with my family when I was a kid.

“When I was a kid”明确表示过去时间，因此主句也应该使用一般过去时。“Have”应改为过去式“had”。

× I remember it maybe one hundred kilometers is a very long journey.

✓ I remember it; maybe one hundred kilometers was a very long journey.

这句话描述的是童年时的一次过去经历，因此与过去经历相关的判断应使用过去式“was”，而不是现在时“is”。