Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap daha doğal ve mantıklı bir akışla düzenlenmelidir. Kısa cümlelerden kaçının, ana fikri açıkça belirtin ve destekleyici ayrıntıları bağlaçlarla bağlayın. Ayrıca bazı kelime hatalarını düzeltin (ör. “pass” → “passengers” değil, muhtemelen “parents” veya “past”; “I watched in all view” anlamsız; “clothes” yanlış kelime). Spesifik öneriler: 1) Açılış cümlesinde tercih belirtin. 2) Bir bağlaç kullanarak nedeninizi açıklayın (because/since/so). 3) Geçmişteki bir örneği tek bir net cümleyle verin ve yer/ yıl belirtin. 4) Ulaşım türünü doğru kelimeyle söyleyin (plane, train, car). 5) Toplamda 3-4 kısa cümleyle sınırlı kalın.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy the city views. For example, last year when I flew to Ontario with my parents, I spent most of the flight looking out and it was beautiful. Sitting by the window helps me relax and feel more connected to the place I’m visiting.

Gợi ý: Cevap daha organize ve zaman uyumuna dikkat ederek verilmelidir. Geçmiş deneyimleri anlatırken simple past kullanın ve cümleleri bağlayıcılarla düzenleyin. Spesifik öneriler: 1) Başlangıçta net bir konu cümlesi kurun (Yes, I often had long journeys…). 2) Yer ve zaman bilgisini açıkça verin. 3) Olayların akışını bağlaçlarla kurun (for example, but, so). 4) Duygu ve sonucu kısaca ekleyin. 5) Gereksiz tekrar ve yanlış yazımlardan kaçının (Inchana/Antonia muhtemel yer adları düzeltilmeli).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often had long car journeys with my family when I was a child. For example, every summer we drove to Antonia, which was a long trip and often took all night. Once our car broke down on the road, so I felt very scared, but my parents fixed it and we continued the journey.

× I prefer to sit by the window usually because I like the city view especially when I travel with pass I went to in Ontario last year.

✓ I usually prefer to sit by the window because I like the city view, especially when I travelled to Ontario last year.

Adverb placement: 'usually' should come before the main verb 'prefer' for natural word order. Sentence is also run-on and confusing; split and reorder to clarify. 'pass I went to in Ontario last year' is unclear; replaced with 'travelled to Ontario last year' to make sense and to use past tense to match the time expression 'last year'. Suggestions: place frequency adverbs (usually, often, always) before the main verb; break long ideas into separate clauses and use appropriate past tense for past events.

× I watched in all view.

✓ I enjoyed the view.

The original is ungrammatical: 'watched in all view' is incorrect word choice and structure. Use 'enjoyed the view' or 'took in the view' to express observing scenery. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'enjoy the view' or 'take in the view'.

× When I travel with plane, I like watching in clothes.

✓ When I travel by plane, I like watching the clouds.

Preposition: use 'by plane' not 'with plane'. Word choice: 'clothes' is incorrect for what you see from a plane; likely meant 'clouds'. Use present simple for habits: 'I like watching the clouds.' Suggestion: learn common transport prepositions ('by car', 'by bus', 'by plane').

× Yes, when I was a child we go to Inchana with my family every year but we went to In Antonia Road was far and night Our car broke down, I was very scared.

✓ Yes, when I was a child we went to Inchana with my family every year. But when we went to Antonia, the road was long and it was night. Our car broke down and I was very scared.

Tense: For past habitual actions, use past tense 'went' not 'go'. The original mixes present and past. Sentence structure: run-on sentence needs splitting and connectors. 'Road was far and night' is ungrammatical; changed to 'the road was long and it was night' to convey meaning. Added 'and' to connect clauses properly. Suggestions: keep verb tenses consistent, split long sentences into clear clauses, and use correct adjectives ('long') and time expressions ('it was night').