Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 答案直接且相关，但存在语法小错误和表达重复。建议：1) 修正语法和搭配（如 “get myself closer to the sceneries” 应改为 “get a better view of the scenery” 或 “be closer to the scenery”）；2) 精简重复信息，最多保持3-4句；3) 使用连接词使句子更自然，如 “because” 后可加具体原因或举例；4) 使用更地道的词汇，例如 “window seat” 和 “take photos of the view”。示例句按此结构练习。

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer the window seat because it gives me a better view of the scenery. Also, it's easier to take photos of the landscape from the window, so I can capture memorable moments during the trip.

Gợi ý: 回答包含主要信息但有语法和连贯性问题。建议：1) 修正过去时态和句子结构（如 “I remember visited” 应为 “I remember visiting” 或 “I visited”）；2) 使用连接词如 “for example” 或 “such as” 来列举地点，使句子更流畅；3) 提供一两句具体细节（为什么迷人，例如建筑、海滩活动或天气），避免简单罗列；4) 控制在三到四句内，保持自然交流。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was young my family took a two-week trip to Australia. We visited Sydney, Melbourne and several coastal towns, and I remember visiting the Sydney Opera House and relaxing at Golden Beach because the architecture and the seaside views were so impressive.

× Yes, I do. I prefer sitting by the window because I can get myself closer to the sceneries and it's more convenient for me to take photos outside

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer sitting by the window because I can get closer to the scenery and it's more convenient for me to take photos outside.

问题类型：动词 + -ing 形式 与 名词使用不当。 解释：句中“get myself closer to the sceneries”有两个问题：1) “get myself closer to”中不需要反身代词“myself”，用“get closer to”更自然；2) “sceneries”为不可数名词，常用单数形式“scenery”。因此改为“get closer to the scenery”。另外整体上保持现在时态，符合偏好陈述。 建议：去掉不必要的反身代词，记住“scenery”通常不可数，用单数形式。

× Yes, I visited Australia with my family when I was young. We spent around two weeks there. I remember visited Sydney, Melbourne and some coastal cities, the Sydney Opera and the Golden Beach were so fascinating.

✓ Yes, I visited Australia with my family when I was young. We spent around two weeks there. I remember visiting Sydney, Melbourne and some coastal cities; the Sydney Opera House and the Golden Beach were so fascinating.

问题类型：过去时与动词 -ing 形式 使用错误。 解释：句中“I remember visited Sydney...”语法错误，动词“remember”后若表示回忆过去的动作，通常接动名词（remember visiting）而不是过去式（remember visited）。此外，“Sydney Opera”应写作“Sydney Opera House”。为使句子更自然，建议把有关景点的部分用分号或连词连接。 建议：使用“remember + -ing”结构表示记得曾经做过的事；注意固定地名的完整形式，例如“Sydney Opera House”。