Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Corrigez la structure et la clarté : répondez directement puis ajoutez une ou deux phrases de soutien précises. Évitez les répétitions et les erreurs grammaticales (par ex. «in front of the video» est incorrect). Utilisez des mots de liaison simples pour la cohérence (par ex. «because», «so», «for example»). Faites attention à la forme verbale et à l'accord: utilisez des phrases complètes et fluides.

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window because I enjoy watching the countryside. For example, I like seeing fields and small villages pass by, and this helps me relax and concentrate on my book.

Gợi ý: Rendez la réponse plus précise et corrigez la grammaire : commencez par une phrase thème claire, puis ajoutez des détails concrets avec des mots de liaison (par ex. «when», «so», «for example»). Corrigez le temps verbal et les accords (par ex. «we had long days», «we could do many things»). Évitez les hésitations et les formulations maladroites.

Ví dụ: Yes, we often had long family outings on weekends when my parents were off work. For example, we would go to the cinema or visit the park, where we played games and had picnics together.

× Yes, I prefer to sit by the window because I love watching the countryside in front of the video, the window, and it helped me to concentrate and.

✓ Yes, I prefer to sit by the window because I love watching the countryside through the window, and it helps me to concentrate.

The original sentence contains extra and incorrect words ('in front of the video') and inconsistent tense ('helped' vs present). This is a sentence structure and tense problem. Remove the irrelevant phrase 'in front of the video' and replace 'helped' with the present tense 'helps' to match 'prefer' and the general truth. Also use the preposition 'through' with 'window' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: simplify sentences, keep tense consistent, and avoid adding unrelated phrases.

× Uh yes, especially during the weekend when my parents are not working, I have long day with us and we can made a lot of things together like going to the cinema or to the park and play with there.

✓ Yes, especially on weekends when my parents are not working, we have long days together and we can do a lot of things, like going to the cinema or to the park and playing there.

Multiple issues: wrong preposition ('during the weekend' -> 'on weekends'), incorrect noun number ('long day' -> 'long days'), incorrect pronoun/phrase order ('I have long day with us' is ungrammatical; use 'we have long days together'), wrong past form 'made' should be base verb 'do' for general activities, and awkward phrase 'play with there' should be 'playing there'. These are sentence structure, plural/singular, verb form and preposition problems. Suggestions: keep subject consistent (we), match singular/plural, use base verb for habitual actions, and place prepositions correctly.