Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

Thí sinh

No I don't I prefer to be close to nature because it makes my mind it makes my mind clean and it can broaden it it can broaden my sight.

Giám khảo

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did. I also remember I remember my Japan my journey to Japan with my parents I can

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Part 1

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更直接并控制句子长度,同时避免重复和语法错误。建议先给出明确的主题句(I prefer not to sit by the window),然后用一到两句具体理由支持。注意用连词(because / and / so)连接句子,并用更自然的表达替换“makes my mind clean”和“broaden my sight”。例如可说“refreshes my mind”或“gives me a wider view”。

Ví dụ: I don’t usually sit by the window when I travel. I prefer to be near the aisle because I like stretching my legs and moving around. However, I enjoy looking at natural scenery because it refreshes my mind and gives me a broader view of the place.

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答要完整并展开细节。避免重复(例如“I remember I remember”),并补充具体信息:什么时候去、旅行持续多久、最难忘的经历或感受。使用连词(for example, because, and)使句子更连贯。控制在最多五句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. For example, when I was ten my parents and I took a long trip to Japan that lasted two weeks. I remember visiting temples and trying new foods, which was exciting and a bit challenging because I didn’t speak the language. That trip left me with many fond memories of exploring different cities together.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× No I don't I prefer to be close to nature because it makes my mind it makes my mind clean and it can broaden it it can broaden my sight.

✓ No, I don't. I prefer to be close to nature because it clears my mind and can broaden my outlook.

问题类型为动名词或动词形式的问题(Verb + -ing form)。原句中“it makes my mind clean”用法不自然且重复“it makes my mind”和“it can broaden it it can broaden my sight”有重复与表达不当。应使用常见搭配“clear my mind”(清除/使头脑清醒)而不是“make my mind clean”,且将“broaden my sight”改为更地道的“broaden my outlook”或“broaden my horizons”。此外需要加标点并去掉重复短语。建议:记住常用搭配(如 clear my mind / broaden my horizons/outlook),避免逐字翻译并删除重复。

Past tense issue

× Yes, I did. I also remember I remember my Japan my journey to Japan with my parents I can

✓ Yes, I did. I also remember my journey to Japan with my parents.

问题类型为过去时态问题(Past tense issue)。原句中有重复“I also remember I remember”且出现未完成的句子结尾“I can”,导致句子不完整。面试问题是过去经历,应使用过去时或现在完成表示记忆(此处用一般现在时的 remember 也可,但句子结构必须完整)。建议删除重复部分并移除不完整的“I can”,或继续补充完整的内容(例如“I can still remember it vividly.”)。此外注意标点以分隔句子。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Clean— Blank; Pure; Virtuous; Neat
Close— Near; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
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