Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence structure: use correct verb forms and articles, and split long run-on sentence into two or three coherent sentences. Add a brief linking word to connect ideas and include one specific detail to make it more vivid. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel. I enjoy looking at the landscape and sometimes watching birds fly alongside the plane or train. Because of the view, I find the journey more relaxing and enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Correct tense and vocabulary, and give clearer, specific details. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g. 'so many', 'seafoods', 'slop slobster'). Provide one or two specific details (when, how long, what impressed you) and use linking words to organise the response.

Ví dụ: Yes, we did. When I was a child my family took a long trip to Scotland during the summer and we spent a whole day exploring the coast. We tried local seafood such as scallops and lobster, which tasted fresh and left a strong impression on me because I had never eaten anything like it before.

× When travelling I prefer sit beside the window at that moment I can enjoy the landscape during the trip so I just looking at the bird and then the landscape outside which is really joyful for me.

✓ When travelling, I prefer to sit beside the window; at that moment I can enjoy the landscape during the trip, so I just look at the birds and the scenery outside, which is really enjoyable for me.

Errors: missing to-infinitive after 'prefer' and incorrect use of present participle 'looking' instead of simple present 'look'. Also plural 'birds' and 'scenery' better than 'the landscape outside' repetition. Correction details: 'prefer' requires 'to' + base verb or gerund; here 'to sit' is natural. For habitual action during the trip use simple present 'I just look'. Use plural 'birds' if referring to more than one, and 'scenery' or 'landscape' with consistent article. Improve punctuation and clause linking for clarity.

× Yes, we did. In this summer we had a day trips to Scotland.

✓ Yes, we did. This summer we had a day trip to Scotland.

Errors: inappropriate preposition 'In this summer' and plural 'a day trips' conflicts with article 'a'. Use 'This summer' for recent past reference and 'a day trip' (singular) to match article. Tense 'had' is correct for completed action.

× We enjoyed some so many seafoods just like scallop and slop slobster which is really tasty and very impressive.

✓ We enjoyed a lot of seafood, such as scallops and lobster, which were really tasty and very impressive.

Errors: 'some so many' is redundant/incorrect; 'seafoods' is uncountable in general use — 'seafood' or countable species 'scallops'. 'slop slobster' appears to be misspelling; use 'lobster'. Agreement: when referring to multiple items use plural 'scallops', and match verb 'were' for plural subject. Use 'such as' for examples. Replace subjective 'very impressive' with acceptable phrasing if needed but kept here.