Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and natural but has grammatical errors, some redundancy and a slightly disorganized flow. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correcting grammar (remove extra 'to', fix word order), avoiding repetition ("by" twice), and adding one concise supporting detail with a linking phrase. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually prefer a window seat. It lets me take photos and short videos of the passing scenery, and I also find it easier to rest with my head against the window.

Gợi ý: Your response answers the question but is fragmented and contains awkward grammar (tense and phrasing). Improve by beginning with a clear topic sentence, using past simple consistently, linking ideas with words like 'and' or 'so', and adding one specific detail (where, how long, or a memorable moment). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child we took a long car trip to visit my grandparents, and the whole family enjoyed chatting and looking at the countryside along the way.

× I prefer to sit by the window because it lets me to capture some moments such as videos and photos of the scenery go by by plus I can take rest keeping my head against the window.

✓ I prefer to sit by the window because it lets me capture moments, such as videos and photos, of the scenery passing by, and I can rest with my head against the window.

Error type: incorrect use of verb + -ing and unnecessary 'to' after 'lets'. 'Let' is followed by the base verb (capture), not 'to capture'. 'The scenery go by by' is ungrammatical; use 'scenery passing by' where 'passing' is the present participle describing the scenery. Also run-on structure and repeated 'by' should be fixed with punctuation and conjunctions. Suggestion: use 'lets me capture', 'scenery passing by', and join ideas with 'and' or separate sentences. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Apart from this I feel more comfortable

✓ Apart from this, I feel more comfortable.

Missing comma after introductory phrase 'Apart from this' makes the sentence awkward. Add a comma for clarity and natural flow. Also the sentence is incomplete as a spoken fragment; punctuation resolves clarity. Grammar problem type ID:20

× Did you have a long journey with your family as a child? Yes, I remember our journey in my childhood that we took for visiting our grandparents.

✓ Yes, I remember a journey from my childhood when we went to visit our grandparents.

Original uses awkward tense and structure: 'we took for visiting' is incorrect. Use simple past 'went to visit' to describe a completed action in the past. 'In my childhood' is better as 'from my childhood' or 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: use 'when we went to visit' or 'when I was a child we went to visit'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Together the family members we had had great moments and enjoyed a lot.

✓ Together, the family members had great moments and enjoyed ourselves a lot.

The phrase 'we had had' is the past perfect which is unnecessary here; simple past 'had' is appropriate. Word order 'Together the family members we had had' is confused and includes redundant subject pronouns. For a natural spoken response, use 'Together, our family had great moments and we enjoyed ourselves a lot' or 'We had great times together and enjoyed ourselves a lot.' Also ensure subject-verb agreement and avoid double subjects. Grammar problem type ID:26

× The scenery, the outside area.

✓ The scenery outside was beautiful.

This fragment lacks a verb and complete structure. It appears to be an incomplete thought; adding a verb and adjective clarifies the meaning. For example: 'The scenery outside was beautiful' or 'I enjoyed the scenery outside.' Use a complete sentence to convey the idea. Grammar problem type ID:23