Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

Thí sinh

Yes, I always prefer to sit by the window when I am travelling somewhere. It's like a by bus or car or by plane whenever I travel I usually prefer to take a seat by the window.

Giám khảo

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had many long journey with my family when I was a kid, my parents took me to travel or we visited more places like Coxbazar, Shunderborne, Silet from Geneda, we travel a lot and we are very enjoyed.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Make your answer more concise, correct grammar, and add a brief reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition (saying you prefer the window multiple times). Use correct prepositions and articles.

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy the views and it feels more private. For example, on flights I like watching the landscape during takeoff, and on buses I can relax and look out at the countryside.

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (plural/singular, past tense), use clearer sentence structure with a topic sentence and supporting details linked by connectors. Give one or two specific examples and correct place names and phrasing. Keep response within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went on long journeys with my family when I was a child. For instance, we visited places such as Cox's Bazar and Sylhet from our home in Gendha, and the trips usually lasted several days. I enjoyed them because we explored new places and spent quality time together.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× Yes, I always prefer to sit by the window when I am travelling somewhere.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to sit by the window when I am traveling somewhere.

The original sentence uses British spelling 'travelling' which is acceptable, but ensure consistency with 'traveling' or 'travelling' depending on chosen variant. No grammatical error otherwise; change is optional for consistency.

Article errors

× It's like a by bus or car or by plane whenever I travel I usually prefer to take a seat by the window.

✓ I like to travel by bus, by car, or by plane; whenever I travel, I usually prefer to sit by the window.

Errors: unnecessary 'a' before modes of transport and run-on sentence. Use preposition 'by' without the article for transport modes (article error/incorrect article usage) and add commas or a semicolon to separate independent clauses. Also replace 'take a seat' with 'sit' for natural phrasing.

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I had many long journey with my family when I was a kid, my parents took me to travel or we visited more places like Coxbazar, Shunderborne, Silet from Geneda, we travel a lot and we are very enjoyed.

✓ Yes, I had many long journeys with my family when I was a kid. My parents took me traveling; we visited places like Cox's Bazar, Sundarbans, and Sylhet from Geneva. We traveled a lot and enjoyed it very much.

Multiple errors fixed: 'journey' should be plural 'journeys' (singular/plural issue). Sentence run-on and tense inconsistency: use past tense 'traveled' and 'enjoyed' to match 'had' and 'took'. Proper nouns corrected and prepositions adjusted. Split into shorter sentences for clarity and correct word order.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Long— Lengthy; Soon; Yearn for
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
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