Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and directly answer first, then give two clear supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid irrelevant or confusing comparisons (e.g. planes vs cars) and correct small grammar mistakes (e.g. "amazed at" not "amazed of"). Aim for 2–4 sentences. Mention motion sickness clearly as a practical reason and describe what you enjoy seeing from the window.

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer a window seat. Firstly, I like watching takeoffs and landings because I find the view and the airport activity fascinating. Secondly, I sit by the window because I often get motion sickness, so looking at the horizon helps me feel better.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid vague openings like "I think everyone..." Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief comment), then give specific details and use linking words (for example, therefore). Remove fillers (uh) and finish the thought—don't trail off. Mention how you coped and maybe one memory or consequence to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had several long family journeys as a child, but I didn't enjoy them. For example, eight-hour drives from Johor to Ipoh made me feel very unwell because of motion sickness, so I coped by looking out of the window and focusing on the horizon. As a result, I often tried to sleep or listen to music to make the trip bearable.

× I'm just amazed of how everything works, how transportation has improved over the years on cars.

✓ I'm just amazed at how everything works and how transportation in cars has improved over the years.

Use of 'amazed of' is incorrect; the correct preposition with 'amazed' is 'at' (Grammar problem type 11: incorrect use of prepositions). Also sentence flow improved by connecting clauses with 'and' and placing 'in cars' before 'has improved' for clarity.

× I also enjoy it 'cause I have motion sickness problems.

✓ I also enjoy it because I have problems with motion sickness.

'Cause is informal; use 'because' in standard speech. 'Motion sickness problems' is awkward; the correct idiom is 'problems with motion sickness' (Grammar problem type 11: incorrect use of prepositions).

× For example, there have been 8 hour drives from Johor to Ipoh and I never feel well on them.

✓ For example, there were eight-hour drives from Johor to Ipoh and I never felt well on them.

Use simple past 'were' for completed past events rather than present perfect 'have been' when giving a past example. Also 'I never feel' should be past 'I never felt' to match past context. Hyphenate 'eight-hour' as a compound adjective and write number in words for clarity (Grammar problem type 5: past tense issue).

× Yes, I do a lot, especially if I'm traveling on a plane, because, for example, when the plane is on the runway preparing for takeoff.

✓ Yes, I do, especially when I'm traveling by plane because I'm fascinated when the plane is on the runway preparing for takeoff.

Original sentence is a fragment: 'because, for example, when the plane is on the runway preparing for takeoff' does not complete the thought. Replace with a complete clause showing reason ('I'm fascinated when...') and use 'by plane' or 'on a plane'; 'traveling by plane' is idiomatic (Grammar problem type 26: sentence structure errors).

× I would try to distract myself by looking out the window, uh, but.

✓ I would try to distract myself by looking out the window, but it didn't always help.

The original ends with 'but' and is an incomplete sentence (fragment). Complete the contrast by adding what happens next ('it didn't always help') to make a full sentence (Grammar problem type 26: sentence structure errors).