Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do. I sit by the window because I like watch landscape outside train or any other any other vehicles and it was so beautiful air.

Giám khảo

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

Thí sinh

No, I did because I was a child I prayed basketball many, many times so I don't have any time.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: まず、この答えは質問に対して直接応えていますが、文法、語順、語彙の誤りや繰り返しがあり、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。改善点の具体的手順:1) 主語と動詞の一致を修正する(例:I like to watch)。2) 不要な繰り返しを避ける(any other を一度にする)。3) 意図を明確にする(landscape と air の表現を整理して、何が美しいのかを具体的に述べる)。4) 接続詞を使って文をつなげ、自然な流れにする(because → so, and, when など)。5) 文は3文以内で簡潔にまとめる。改善後に使える表現例を練習し、語彙(landscape, scenery, clouds, view, feel the breeze)を増やすと良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel. I like to watch the scenery outside—especially the countryside and clouds—because it is relaxing and interesting. Sometimes I also enjoy feeling the breeze through an open window if the vehicle allows it.

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

Điểm: 34.0

Gợi ý: この答えは意味が取りにくく、質問に正しく答えられていません(矛盾:'No, I did')。まずはYes/Noの選択を明確にし、理由を整理して述べる必要があります。具体的な改善手順:1) 正しい肯定・否定で始める(例:No, I didn’t. / Yes, I did.)。2) 理由を一つ明確に述べる(忙しかった、遠出が少なかった、金銭的な事情など)。3) 補足として具体例や頻度、思い出を短く述べる。4) 不要な語句(prayed basketball)や間違った単語を正しい表現に直す(played basketball)。5) 全体を2〜3文で簡潔にまとめる。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have many long journeys with my family when I was a child. We lived near relatives and usually visited them for short weekends, and I often spent free time playing football with friends instead of going on long trips.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I sit by the window because I like watch landscape outside train or any other any other vehicles and it was so beautiful air.

✓ I sit by the window because I like watching the landscape outside the train and other vehicles, and the air is so beautiful.

The verb 'like' must be followed by a gerund when describing general preferences (verb + -ing). Use 'watching' instead of 'watch'. Also add articles and prepositions: 'the landscape' and 'outside the train'. 'Other vehicles' is sufficient without repeating 'any other'. The clause 'and it was so beautiful air' is ungrammatical; use 'the air is so beautiful' to match present-tense preference and natural phrasing. Suggestions: use 'like' + gerund for habits and preferences, include necessary articles ('the'), avoid repetition, and keep tense consistent.

Past tense issue

× No, I did because I was a child I prayed basketball many, many times so I don't have any time.

✓ No, I didn't. When I was a child I played basketball many times, so I didn't have any free time.

The original uses incorrect auxiliary and verbs. To negate in past tense use 'didn't' not 'did'. 'Prayed basketball' is incorrect verb choice; use 'played basketball'. 'Many, many times' is acceptable but 'many times' is sufficient. 'So I don't have any time' mixes present tense with past; change to 'didn't have any free time' to maintain past tense. Also add 'When' to link clauses and 'free' to clarify 'time'. Suggestions: use correct past tense forms and auxiliaries ('didn't' for negative), choose appropriate verbs ('play' for sports), and keep tense consistency within the sentence.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Beautiful— Attractive
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
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