Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

Thí sinh

No, I prefer the IO sets actually because I don't want to bother or you damn the person who's next to me and for me it's more convenient to go to the restroom.

Giám khảo

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes. Overall, it was a pretty good experience, but sometimes we had disagreement on activities. So we have to compromise with each other, even our intentions differ.

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Part 1

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

Điểm: 46.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且有语法和用词错误(如“I/O sets”“you damn”不合适)。句子过长且含混,未使用清晰的主题句和连贯的支持细节。建议先给出直接回答,然后用一到两句具体、礼貌的原因并使用连词连接。例如说明不想打扰旁人、上厕所方便等。注意用词礼貌且避免口语脏话。

Ví dụ: No, I prefer the aisle seat. I find it less likely to disturb the person next to me, and it is more convenient if I need to use the restroom. Also, I can stretch my legs more easily on long trips.

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 回答总体符合要求,但表达可以更自然、更具体。主题句明确,但支持细节过于笼统,缺少具体例子和连词的自然使用。建议给出一两个具体回忆(如去过哪里、发生了什么分歧)并用连词(for example, however, so)连接,句子保持在三到四句以内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went on long trips with my family when I was a child. Overall they were enjoyable, but we sometimes disagreed about activities; for example, my parents preferred sightseeing while my siblings wanted to relax at the beach. As a result, we usually compromised by splitting the day between sightseeing and relaxation.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, I prefer the IO sets actually because I don't want to bother or you damn the person who's next to me and for me it's more convenient to go to the restroom.

✓ No, I prefer the aisle seats actually because I don't want to bother or upset the person who's next to me, and it's more convenient for me to go to the restroom.

句中有代词和词语使用错误:"IO sets" 应为 "aisle seats"(拼写/词汇错误,不在列表中,但与代词及指代相关)。"you damn the person" 是不正确和不礼貌的表达,意思不清,应改为 "upset the person"。此外,短语顺序和代词使用不当:把 "for me" 放在后半句开头更自然;"to go to the restroom" 前加上 "convenient for me to" 更符合英语习惯。建议:使用正确词汇(aisle seats),用合适的动词(upset/bother),并将 "for me" 放在合适位置以保证句子流畅。

Past tense issue

× Yes. Overall, it was a pretty good experience, but sometimes we had disagreement on activities.

✓ Yes. Overall, it was a pretty good experience, but sometimes we had disagreements about activities.

句中时态总体为过去,但名词和介词用法不当。"had disagreement" 应为可数复数形式 "had disagreements"(既有复数问题也涉及名词形式,但按列表使用过去时相关)。另外介词 "on activities" 常用为 "about activities"。建议:将名词变为复数并使用正确介词,保持过去时一致。

Sentence structure errors

× So we have to compromise with each other, even our intentions differ.

✓ So we had to compromise with each other, even when our intentions differed.

原句时态不一致:前面描述过去经历,应使用过去时 "had" 和 "differed" 而不是现在时。并且连接词和结构需要补足,使用 "even when" 引导让步从句更自然。建议:保持全句时态一致,使用适当连词(even when)使表达完整。

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