Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like to sit by the window in the traveling.

Giám khảo

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have a long journey with my parents because they are very busy and work hard.

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Part 1

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然但有语法与表达不够地道的问题。可以把句子更简洁、地道地表述,并在必要时补充原因或具体细节以丰富内容。例如说明喜欢窗边的原因(看风景、避免晕车等)。注意不要多于五句,使用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually prefer a window seat when I travel because I enjoy looking at the scenery. It helps me relax, and I also find it easier to sleep with something to lean on.

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且内容清楚,但可以更自然、具体地表达原因并加一两个细节来丰富答案。例如说明大人忙碌的具体工作或举一个例子,或提到是否有其他短途旅行或特殊回忆。使用连接词(because, so, however)使逻辑更顺畅。

Ví dụ: No, I rarely went on long trips with my parents when I was a child because they both worked long hours. Instead, we sometimes took short weekend outings to nearby parks, which I still remember fondly.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Yes, I like to sit by the window in the traveling.

✓ Yes, I like to sit by the window when travelling.

句子中使用了不正确的冠词和介词搭配。原句的“in the traveling”是不自然且不符合英语习惯的表达。通常谈论“旅行时坐在窗边”应使用时间状语从句“when travelling”或“when I travel”。建议使用“when travelling”或“when I travel”。同时保留“the window”为特指机窗/车窗的正确用法。

Past tense issue

× No, I didn't have a long journey with my parents because they are very busy and work hard.

✓ No, I didn't have a long journey with my parents because they were very busy and worked hard.

句子主句使用了过去时(didn't have),表示谈论过去的情况;但原因从句使用现在时(are, work),时态不一致。应把表示过去的背景信息也用过去时,即把“are”改为“were”,“work”改为“worked”。这样时态一致,符合英语时态搭配规则。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Busy— Occupied; Unavailable; Hectic
Hard— Firm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
Long— Lengthy; Soon; Yearn for
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