Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and organization. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'scenery') and grammar (e.g., subject-verb agreement, articles, and word order). Keep the answer concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel. I enjoy watching the scenery outside because it helps me relax and pass the time. Also, sitting by the window is more comfortable and convenient for taking photos of the city views. For example, on my last trip I captured several good pictures of the skyline from the train.

Gợi ý: Focus on producing a coherent short narrative: answer directly, then give specific details (where you went, who was with you, what made it memorable). Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., 'relatives', 'village' or 'page' unclear). Use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') and limit to 3–4 sentences. Clarify the place and a specific memory to make the response vivid and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, we often took long road trips when I was a child. My family and I drove to visit my relatives who lived in a small village about three hours away. I remember those trips fondly because we would sing songs in the car and stop for local snacks along the way, which made the journey feel like an adventure.

× I love looking at sannary while travelling and when you have a seat is nearby the window is feel more comfortable and convenient and I can take the photo of the view of the city.

✓ I love looking at scenery while travelling, and when my seat is near the window I feel more comfortable and it is more convenient, and I can take photos of the city view.

Multiple errors: 'sannary' is a spelling error and should be 'scenery' (not in list but corrected). 'when you have a seat is nearby the window' has incorrect pronoun and word order and should be 'when my seat is near the window' (incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure — types 12 and 26). 'is feel' incorrectly mixes auxiliary with base verb; use simple present 'I feel' (present tense / verb form — type 6 and 8). 'take the photo of the view of the city' is awkward; use plural 'take photos of the city view' for natural English (singular/plural issue — type 1). Suggestions: use correct noun 'scenery', keep subject consistent ('my seat' or 'I'), use simple present tense for habitual preferences ('I love', 'I feel'), ensure correct word order 'seat is near the window', and use plural 'photos' when speaking generally.

× Of course we used to have the long road trip.

✓ Of course we used to go on long road trips.

'Used to have the long road trip' is unnatural. 'Used to' should be followed by the base verb describing the habitual action: 'used to go on long road trips.' Also change 'the long road trip' to plural 'road trips' to indicate repeated childhood trips if that is intended (singular/plural issue — type 1). Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb and choose appropriate pluralization for habitual events.

× This is a memorable trip.

✓ That was a memorable trip.

In the context of recounting a past event, use past tense 'was' rather than present 'is' (past tense issue — type 5). Also 'This' in a narration about the past is better as 'That'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent when describing past experiences.

× When I was a child when we Visit our related who live in the page.

✓ When I was a child, we visited our relatives who lived on the island.

Multiple issues: 'when' is repeated — sentence structure error (type 26). 'Visit' must be past tense 'visited' to match 'When I was a child' (past tense issue — type 5). 'our related' is incorrect; use 'our relatives' (incorrect use of pronouns/adjectives — type 12/13). 'who live in the page' is incorrect preposition and noun; likely intended 'who lived on the island' or 'in that town' depending on meaning. I suggest 'lived on the island' using preposition 'on' (incorrect use of prepositions — type 11) and past tense 'lived' to maintain consistency. Overall suggestion: avoid repeating conjunctions, ensure verb tense agreement in past narratives, use correct nouns (relatives), and choose proper prepositions for locations.