Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer direct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), avoid repetition and correct word choice. Use one or two supporting details and a linking word. For example, say you like seeing the landscape and give a specific detail about what you enjoy (mountains, cities, etc.).

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy looking at the scenery. For example, on long train rides I like watching the countryside and mountains pass by, which helps me relax and makes the journey more interesting.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly and avoid repetition and incorrect facts. Give one concise topic sentence about the trip, then add specific supporting details (where you went, what you saw, how you felt). Use linking words (for example, and, because) and correct factual expressions (e.g., Chengdu is a city in southwest China).

Ví dụ: Yes, I went on a long trip to Chengdu with my parents when I was a child. Chengdu is a beautiful city in southwest China, and we visited famous attractions such as the Giant Panda Breeding Research Base and Jinli Ancient Street, which I remember fondly because the pandas were so cute and the food was delicious.

× I prefer to book a seat by closing window because I like to because when I when I traveling and I like to see the land landscape or scorn.

✓ I prefer to book a seat by the window because when I travel I like to see the landscape or scorn.

Error: incorrect use of verb + -ing form and redundant words. 'when I traveling' is incorrect; after 'when' use base verb 'I travel' (present simple) to express habitual action. Also remove repeated 'because' and 'when I' and change 'by closing window' to 'by the window'. Suggestion: use 'when I travel' for routines and 'the window' as the correct noun phrase; remove redundant words to improve clarity.

× I prefer to book a seat by closing window because I like to because when I when I traveling and I like to see the land landscape or scorn.

✓ I prefer to book a seat by the window because I like to see the landscape when I travel.

Error: confusing and repetitive sentence structure. The original repeats phrases ('because', 'when I') and mixes clauses awkwardly. Reorder clauses to 'I prefer... because...' and place the subordinate time clause 'when I travel' at the end or after the verb. Also choose a single noun 'landscape' rather than 'land landscape'. This improves fluency and coherence.

× We we went to Chengdu together and the Chengdu is a beautiful city located in southwest in China is the capital city in Paris.

✓ We went to Chengdu together. Chengdu is a beautiful city located in southwest China.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' before Chengdu and wrong phrase 'in southwest in China' and an incorrect claim 'is the capital city in Paris.' Remove duplicated 'we' and 'the' before proper noun Chengdu. Use 'southwest China' without 'in'. The clause about Paris is factually incorrect and grammatically misplaced; omit it. Also split into two sentences for clarity.

× And there is a there is a lot of tourist spots and.

✓ There are a lot of tourist spots.

Error: subject-verb agreement and redundancy. 'There is a lot of tourist spots' is incorrect because 'a lot of tourist spots' is plural, so use 'There are'. Also remove duplicate 'there is a' and trailing 'and'. Suggestion: use 'There are a lot of tourist spots' or 'There are many tourist attractions' for variety.