Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct basic grammar (verb forms, articles, word order) and avoid repetition. Keep it under five sentences. For example, say you prefer the window seat, explain one specific reason (e.g., scenery or fresh air), and finish with a brief comment about how it makes you feel.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel. I like it because I can watch the passing scenery, such as green fields and mountains, and it helps me relax. Also, I enjoy feeling the fresh breeze when the window is open, which makes the journey more pleasant.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear, concise recollection with correct tense and specific details. Begin with a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a long journey, then give one or two specific facts (destination, mode of transport, duration) and a short feeling or result. Use past tense consistently and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a long journey with my family when I was a child. We traveled to Langkawi, Malaysia, by train, and the trip took about six hours. I still remember feeling excited but a little tired by the end of the journey.

× Yes, definitely I really like to see to set a next to window when the travelling because I can saw a Greenfield and so I can enjoying with fresh, fresh breeze. So this is very happy and enjoy.

✓ Yes, definitely. I really like to sit next to the window when I am travelling because I can see green fields and enjoy the fresh breeze. It makes me very happy.

This sentence contains several grammar problems that match the listed types: 2 (third person singular issue - partly relevant for verb forms), 6 (present tense issue), 8 (verb + -ing form), 9/10 (past/present participle misuse), 11 (prepositions), 12 (pronouns), 13 (adjectives/adverbs), 22 (article errors), and 26 (sentence structure). Specific errors: 'see to set a next to window' uses incorrect verbs and word order; 'set' should be 'sit' (wrong verb), 'next to window' needs article 'the' and correct order; 'when the travelling' should be 'when I am travelling' (missing subject and auxiliary, present continuous for ongoing activity); 'I can saw' uses past tense instead of base form 'see'; 'a Greenfield' should be plural or 'a green field' and lowercase; 'I can enjoying' uses incorrect verb form; 'fresh, fresh breeze' repetitive adjective should be 'the fresh breeze' or 'fresh breeze'; 'So this is very happy and enjoy' incorrect structure—use 'It makes me very happy' or 'I enjoy it.' Suggestions: use base verb forms after modal/can, use present continuous for ongoing actions, include appropriate articles before nouns, use correct adjective order and avoid repetition, and restructure sentence into two clear sentences.

× Yes, when I was shy, my parents take take me go to the Langkawi Malaysia.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents took me to Langkawi, Malaysia.

Errors match type 5 (past tense issue), 12 (pronouns/article), and 11 (prepositions). 'when I was shy' likely intended 'when I was a child' (vocabulary/meaning). 'take take me go' is incorrect: the past tense of 'take' is 'took' and the structure should be 'took me to' (use preposition to). 'the Langkawi Malaysia' should be 'Langkawi, Malaysia' (no definite article before proper place names). Suggestion: use correct past tense verbs for past events, use 'to' after 'take' when indicating destination, and use 'a child' instead of 'shy' if meaning age.

× Uh, this is first time long journey because, uh, this because I wrote a train around uh, six hours.

✓ Uh, it was my first long journey because I rode on a train for about six hours.

This matches types 5 (past tense issue) and 26 (sentence structure errors) and 8/9 (verb form misuse). Problems: 'this is first time long journey' should be past tense 'it was my first long journey' and needs articles: 'my first long journey.' 'I wrote a train' uses wrong verb 'wrote' instead of 'rode' and missing preposition: 'rode on a train' or 'took a train.' 'around uh, six hours' should be 'for about six hours.' Suggest replacing incorrect verbs with correct past tense forms, add articles, and use 'for/about' for duration.

× So this is very long journey.

✓ So it was a very long journey.

This matches type 5 (past tense issue) and 26 (sentence structure). The speaker refers to a past event so use past tense 'was.' Also include article 'a' before 'very long journey.' The original is a fragment lacking correct tense and article. Suggestion: ensure tense matches context and include necessary articles to make the sentence grammatically complete.