Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap daha açık ve yapısal olmalı; doğrudan konu cümlesiyle başlayın, nedenlerinizi bağlaçlarla (because, so, and) net şekilde ifade edin ve fazla tekrar veya anlamsız kelime kullanımından kaçının. Örneğin, pencere kenarını tercih etme nedeninizi belirtin, ardından bunun size ne hissettirdiğini ve bir örnek verin. Dilbilgisi için ‘when I went to Italy’, ‘the city is historic’, ‘I like the urban sites’ gibi doğru ifadeler kullanın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy looking at the scenery. For example, when I went to Italy I loved seeing the historic buildings and urban sites from the plane, which made me feel excited and curious.

Gợi ý: Cevap doğrudan geçmiş zamanda ve daha düzenli cümlelerle verilmeli. Önce kısa bir konu cümlesi kullanın (Yes, I did.), sonra nedenleri ve bir örnek ile açıklayın. Zamir ve zaman uyumuna dikkat edin (we went to Muğla, not Mula; use ‘I felt relaxed’). Bağlaçlarla cümleleri birbirine bağlayın ve cümle sonunu tamamlayın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. As a child, my family and I went on a long trip to Muğla, a coastal holiday town. I loved it because of the beautiful sea and relaxed atmosphere, and I still remember feeling very calm and happy during that holiday.

× If I prefer to sit by the window when I got Italy because of I like Italy, this city has historical. The urban sites and I love these.

✓ I prefer to sit by the window when I travel to Italy because I like its history and historic urban sites.

The original contains multiple sentence structure problems: incorrect conditional 'If I prefer' and past form 'got' instead of 'go' or 'travel', awkward phrase 'because of I like Italy', and fragmented sentences 'this city has historical. The urban sites and I love these.' Combine ideas into one clear present-tense statement matching the question. Use 'I prefer' (present simple) for habitual preference, 'travel to Italy' for movement, 'because I like' for reason, and 'its history and historic urban sites' as proper noun phrases. Suggestion: practice forming simple cause sentences: subject + verb + because + clause; keep tense consistent (present simple for general preferences).

× Yes, I have a long journey with my family as a child we want to Mula. Mula has sea and holiday city. So I love this city because I am feeling relaxing and.

✓ Yes, I had a long journey with my family when I was a child; we went to Mula. Mula is a seaside holiday town, so I loved it because I felt relaxed.

Errors: incorrect tense 'have' should be past 'had' for a childhood event; missing clause connector and wrong phrase 'we want to Mula' (probably 'we went to Mula'); 'Mula has sea and holiday city' is incorrect word order and word choice—use 'Mula is a seaside holiday town'; 'I love this city because I am feeling relaxing and' mixes present and gerund incorrectly—use past 'I loved it because I felt relaxed.' Keep past tense consistency for past experiences. Suggestion: when talking about past experiences, use past simple for completed actions and past states, and use appropriate verbs (go -> went, have -> had, feel -> felt).