Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp nhưng câu chứa lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp (ví dụ “Dust is the most things” không phù hợp). Nên mở rộng thêm một câu giải thích lí do cụ thể, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (because, so), giữ tối đa 4–5 câu, và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (prefer, enjoy, look out at, scenery).

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when travelling. I enjoy looking out at the landscape because it helps me relax and pass the time. For example, I like watching clouds and cities from above on flights. So I almost always try to choose a window seat.

Gợi ý: Cần dùng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác và chi tiết hơn. Hiện câu có lỗi chia động từ và thiếu mạo từ/định từ (“very into” → “were very into”; “new beach” → “new beaches” hoặc “a new beach”). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, thêm thông tin cụ thể (ví dụ địa điểm, tần suất, kỷ niệm) và dùng liên từ (because, so, for example) để làm rõ ý.

Ví dụ: Yes, we often had long journeys when I was a child. My family were very into long-distance travel because my parents loved exploring new places. For example, we visited beaches and mountains every summer, and I remember camping on a seaside cliff once. Those trips made my childhood very happy.

× Dust is the most things I would like to do when I have a chance to travel on a plane.

✓ Sitting by the window is the thing I would most like to do when I have a chance to travel by plane.

The original sentence misuses 'Dust' instead of 'Sitting by the window' and mixes 'most things' awkwardly. This is an issue with word choice and adjective/adverb order. Use a noun phrase 'Sitting by the window' as the subject, 'the thing I would most like to do' to express preference, and the preposition 'by plane' should be 'by plane' or 'on a plane'; here 'travel by plane' is idiomatic. Suggestion: replace incorrect word 'Dust' with correct noun phrase and reorder 'most' before the verb phrase 'like to do' for clarity.

× My family very into travelling long distance.

✓ My family were/was very into travelling long distances.

The sentence lacks an auxiliary or linking verb and has quantifier/number issues. The problem fits quantifier/verb usage: 'very into' needs a verb 'were' or 'was' depending on whether family is treated as plural or singular (both acceptable; choose 'were' for individuals or 'was' for the family as a unit). Also 'long distance' should be pluralized to 'long distances' or use 'long-distance travel'. Suggestion: add the verb 'was' or 'were' and pluralize or hyphenate as appropriate.

× Uh, we want to explore new beach or new mountains and that was a quite lovely childhood to me.

✓ We wanted to explore new beaches or new mountains, and that was a lovely childhood for me.

Problems: tense inconsistency and incorrect article/word order. 'We want' should be past tense 'we wanted' because the question asks about childhood. 'New beach' should be plural 'new beaches' or use articles ('a new beach'), and 'a quite lovely childhood to me' is unidiomatic — use 'a lovely childhood for me' or 'that made my childhood quite lovely'. This is a sentence structure error: reorder phrases, correct tense, pluralize nouns, and use natural preposition 'for me'. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout, pluralize 'beach' or use articles, and use 'for me'.