Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct minor grammar and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using a linking word. Avoid repeating words ("it's it's"). Use a wider range of vocabulary (e.g., "scenery", "relaxing").

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window because I enjoy the scenery. For example, I can watch landscapes and passing towns, which makes the journey more relaxing and interesting.

Gợi ý: Fix tense and pronunciation issues and give specific, coherent information. Begin with a direct answer, then add clear details (when, how often, duration) using linking words like "usually" or "often". Avoid filler sounds and unclear numbers. Use correct past tense: "we travelled" or "we used to travel".

Ví dụ: Yes, we used to travel from the city to our village often when I was a child. Typically, the journey took about five to six hours, and we usually went during holidays, so it felt like a very long trip.

× Yes, I prefer because I feel it's it's a good idea to sit at the window.

✓ Yes, I prefer it because I feel it's a good idea to sit by the window.

The original sentence omits the object pronoun after 'prefer' and repeats 'it's'. Use 'prefer it' to make the sentence complete. Also use the correct preposition 'by the window' (see next item). Remove the duplicate 'it's'. A corrected version: 'Yes, I prefer it because I feel it's a good idea to sit by the window.' Suggestion: add the object pronoun after 'prefer' and avoid repeated words.

× You can see all the view from the window when you travel somewhere.

✓ You can see the whole view from the window when you travel somewhere.

'All the view' is unidiomatic. Use 'the whole view' or 'all the views'. Also 'from the window' is correct here. The suggestion: use 'the whole view' to express seeing everything, or 'many views' if plural.

× Yeah, we are travel, uh, from city to our village many times, so it's a very long journey for me, uh, like UH5TO65 to six hours distance from city to village.

✓ Yeah, we traveled from the city to our village many times when I was a child, so it was a very long journey for me, about five to six hours' distance from the city to the village.

The student mixed present continuous 'are travel' with past context ('as a child'). Use past tense 'traveled' and 'was' to match the time reference. Also add articles: 'the city', 'the village'. Replace the garbled 'UH5TO65' with 'five to six'. Use 'about five to six hours' and possessive distance expression 'five to six hours' distance' or better 'about five to six hours by car'. Suggestion: choose past tense consistently and include definite articles for specific places.