Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?
Thí sinh
I don't like, uh, I don't, I don't know, uh, why? Uh, because I don't traveling so much, so it's difficult to me to respond to this question.
Giám khảo
Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?
Thí sinh
I don't had so much journey with my parents. Uh, why we don't have so much money?
Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?
Điểm: 34.0Gợi ý: Migliora la chiarezza e la correttezza grammaticale. Inizia con una frase diretta che risponda alla domanda, evita ripetizioni e suoni di esitazione (uh). Fornisci un motivo breve e concreto usando una struttura corretta (ad esempio: "No, I prefer the aisle because...") e aggiungi una frase di supporto con parole di collegamento come "because" o "so". Limita la risposta a massimo 3-4 frasi naturali e coerenti.
Ví dụ: No, I don't particularly prefer the window seat because I don't travel often and I value easy access to the aisle. For long trips I usually choose the aisle so I can get up more easily.
Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: Correggi la grammatica e rendi la risposta più naturale e completa. Rispondi direttamente con una frase al passato (es. "No, we didn't travel much when I was a child") e poi spiega brevemente la ragione usando collegamenti come "because". Evita espressioni frammentarie e domande retoriche. Fornisci un esempio specifico se possibile (una gita o una vacanza breve).
Ví dụ: No, we didn't take many long journeys when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford expensive trips. The few trips we had were usually short visits to relatives in nearby towns.
× I don't like, uh, I don't, I don't know, uh, why? Uh, because I don't traveling so much, so it's difficult to me to respond to this question.
✓ I don't travel much, so it's difficult for me to answer this question.
The error involves incorrect verb form after 'do not' and wrong sentence structure. In English, do/does + base verb is used for negatives in the present tense, so 'don't traveling' is wrong; it should be 'don't travel' (base form). Also, 'difficult to me to respond' is unnatural; use 'difficult for me to answer.' Suggestion: use 'do not' + base verb and the phrase 'difficult for me to + base verb.'
× I don't had so much journey with my parents.
✓ I didn't have many journeys with my parents.
The sentence mixes present auxiliary 'do' with past form 'had.' For past negative, use did not (didn't) + base verb, so 'didn't have' is correct. Also, 'so much journey' is uncountable phrasing; use 'many journeys' or 'many trips.' Suggestion: use 'didn't have' and 'many trips/journeys.'
× Uh, why we don't have so much money?
✓ We didn't have much money when I was a child.
The original sentence has incorrect word order for a question and mismatched tense. The context is past (childhood), so use past tense 'didn't have.' If keeping it a statement, use 'We didn't have much money.' Also 'so much money' is acceptable but 'much money' is more natural in negative past. Suggestion: use past negative 'didn't have' and place time expression 'when I was a child' if clarifying context.