Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + reason). Avoid wrong word choices and filler sounds. Use linking words for support and keep within 3–4 concise sentences. Be specific about what you enjoy and how it affects you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy watching the scenery change. For example, I like seeing mountains and coastlines pass by, which helps me relax. As a result, the journey feels more enjoyable and peaceful.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar, verb tense and vocabulary accuracy. Begin with a clear topic sentence and add specific supporting details (when, who, what you liked). Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incorrect place names. Keep answers natural and concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I went on several long journeys with my family when I was a child. We often travelled to Bagan to see the ancient temples and broad landscapes, and I remember being amazed by how picturesque everything looked. Because of those trips, Bagan still feels like a living painting in my memory.

× I am profiled to sit by the window as I'm traffic because I like watching dictionary change and the landscape.

✓ I prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I like watching the scenery change and the landscape.

'Profiled' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'prefer' (preference). 'I'm traffic' is ungrammatical and likely intended as 'when I travel'. 'Dictionary change' is wrong word choice; use 'scenery change'. Ensure verbs and nouns match meaning and use simple present for habitual preference.

× For example, I like watching the mountains and the coastline pass by.

✓ For example, I like watching the mountains and the coastline pass by.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. The adverbial phrase 'For example' is correctly placed and the verb 'pass by' is appropriate for moving scenery.

× It makes me relax and become UMM and that make the journey more.

✓ It helps me relax and makes the journey more enjoyable.

'Makes me relax' is acceptable but 'helps me relax' is more natural. 'Become UMM' is unclear and nonstandard; replace with 'relaxed'. Subject-verb agreement: 'that make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular 'that' or 'it'. Add an adjective 'enjoyable' to complete the idea.

× I had a family long journey when I was a child.

✓ I had a long family journey when I was a child.

Word order is awkward; 'long family journey' should be 'long family journey' or more natural 'long journey with my family'. Use past simple 'had' correctly for a past event.

× We used to travel to Bagan and we love seeing the Asian tempets and the landscapes up again.

✓ We used to travel to Bagan and we loved seeing the Asian temples and the landscapes again.

Tense consistency: talking about childhood trips requires past tense 'loved' rather than 'love'. 'Tempets' is a misspelling; correct word is 'temples'. 'Up again' is unnecessary; replace with 'again' or omit. Keep past tense throughout the sentence.

× If I had to describe Baguette in one way, it looks like a living painting.

✓ If I had to describe Bagan in one way, I would say it looks like a living painting.

Place name was likely misspelled as 'Baguette' instead of 'Bagan'. In a conditional 'If I had to describe...,' use 'I would say' to complete the clause; 'it looks' could remain but 'I would say it looks like' is more idiomatic. Maintain conditional structure and correct proper noun spelling.